The Eden Tree
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Comment from bowls
Ah, I like this bit of action! Just when it looked as if all was lost, the cavalry arrives, as Sean says. Good addition of humour which adds a varied tone here. I really like the way your plot doesn't travel in a straight line for any length of time. You always have some twist or turn to add interest.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Ah, I like this bit of action! Just when it looked as if all was lost, the cavalry arrives, as Sean says. Good addition of humour which adds a varied tone here. I really like the way your plot doesn't travel in a straight line for any length of time. You always have some twist or turn to add interest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words and avid reading!
Comment from Ekim777
You happily delve into sensitive issues but in this your last chapter we look for the denouement. I have worked as a liaison to the U.N. along our borders and sometimes played the role of low grade spy; mostly I wrote character sketches of U. N officers and on the strength of this I wrote an outlandish piece called The Makings of a Spy about an Israeli spy in North Korea which is even more outlandish. I've got a fertile imagination. Spy work is very intriguing, another world and I wonder if you capture this element. I would be curious to see your response to my piece. I think it comes in two parts and can be found in my portfolio page2/3. Best wishes. Ekim777
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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You happily delve into sensitive issues but in this your last chapter we look for the denouement. I have worked as a liaison to the U.N. along our borders and sometimes played the role of low grade spy; mostly I wrote character sketches of U. N officers and on the strength of this I wrote an outlandish piece called The Makings of a Spy about an Israeli spy in North Korea which is even more outlandish. I've got a fertile imagination. Spy work is very intriguing, another world and I wonder if you capture this element. I would be curious to see your response to my piece. I think it comes in two parts and can be found in my portfolio page2/3. Best wishes. Ekim777
Comment Written 10-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Thanks for your comments. I will take a look at your work.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Well written. There is one place you need a space between paragraphs. Otherwise, no spags. This is interesting and enjoyable!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Well written. There is one place you need a space between paragraphs. Otherwise, no spags. This is interesting and enjoyable!!! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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thanks for your great words.