Steve's Story-Poems
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23 total reviews
Comment from jgirlie152
How very clever this poem is. You used great imagination in the tale, and it reads extremely well and rhythmic.
This definitely made me laugh out loud and I implore you to keep writing these amusing poems.
Best wishes, Joan
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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How very clever this poem is. You used great imagination in the tale, and it reads extremely well and rhythmic.
This definitely made me laugh out loud and I implore you to keep writing these amusing poems.
Best wishes, Joan
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Thanks, Joan. This kind of nonsense comes easily to me so no doubt you will see more...
Steve
Comment from sweetthanesue
yea.... great to have a laugh and love morals to stories
well presented title and pic rhyme and rhythm great
thanks for the lift good day starts with a smile.....sue
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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yea.... great to have a laugh and love morals to stories
well presented title and pic rhyme and rhythm great
thanks for the lift good day starts with a smile.....sue
Comment Written 10-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Thanks, Sue.
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Steve,
Quite bloody brilliant and in wonderful rhyme and metre too. I even forgive the new word "dentable" . Should be more writing like this.
Best regards
Reg
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Dear Steve,
Quite bloody brilliant and in wonderful rhyme and metre too. I even forgive the new word "dentable" . Should be more writing like this.
Best regards
Reg
Comment Written 10-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Thanks, Reg - usage of that word was accidentable.
Steve
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Good one Steve.
Comment from nancyjam
Oh, I have to give you a 6 for this one.
Not only is it witty and funny but cleverly
rhymed and in good meter for the Limerick style.
You brightened my morning. thanks
so much for sharing this humorous tale. Nancy
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Oh, I have to give you a 6 for this one.
Not only is it witty and funny but cleverly
rhymed and in good meter for the Limerick style.
You brightened my morning. thanks
so much for sharing this humorous tale. Nancy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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The royals of kitchKaiYu
Have brightened the morning for you
Their sudden extinction
Earned six star distinction
For me, so what else could I do?
Thanks, nancy
Steve
Comment from Quire's Gal
"Last night as they massaged their sorrow" ?! This is too much fun to be legal! What an undertaking this must have been Steve. You've really hit the nail on the funny bone with this one.
Flawless rhymes ans meter combined with the fact you managed to string a bunch of limericks together to tell a story makes more than worthy of a six.
The massaging their sorrow line was priceless and left me speechless. LOL
Well done sir!
Katherine
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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"Last night as they massaged their sorrow" ?! This is too much fun to be legal! What an undertaking this must have been Steve. You've really hit the nail on the funny bone with this one.
Flawless rhymes ans meter combined with the fact you managed to string a bunch of limericks together to tell a story makes more than worthy of a six.
The massaging their sorrow line was priceless and left me speechless. LOL
Well done sir!
Katherine
Comment Written 09-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012
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Thanks, Katherine, for the nice review and the six stars.
Funny which lines different people pick as their favourites...
Steve
Comment from jackpeg
So humorous and how perfectly limericked! They'd love this in Dublin. You are a rhymer par excellance, Kiwi. No, I won't try this at home.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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So humorous and how perfectly limericked! They'd love this in Dublin. You are a rhymer par excellance, Kiwi. No, I won't try this at home.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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Thank you! I started scribbling this piece of nonsense for the Fable competition - and then found out it was closed... Duh!
Steve
Comment from visionary1234
oh you are such a limerick master! What a GREAT sense of rhyme and rhythm you have - CLEVER, tongue in cheek rhyme - love it! Love "Their Highnesses splatter/ Like pancakes (but flatter)! Well done Kiwi!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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oh you are such a limerick master! What a GREAT sense of rhyme and rhythm you have - CLEVER, tongue in cheek rhyme - love it! Love "Their Highnesses splatter/ Like pancakes (but flatter)! Well done Kiwi!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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Thank you! I started scribbling this piece of nonsense for the Fable competition - and then found out it was closed... Duh!
Steve
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glad I'm not the only one who does stuff like that! you're REALLY good at this rhyming biz kiddo!
Comment from Anastajiya
This is such a funny poem and so beautifully written, you really had me laughing all the way. Great job with this it is great or actually excellent!
- Anastajiya
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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This is such a funny poem and so beautifully written, you really had me laughing all the way. Great job with this it is great or actually excellent!
- Anastajiya
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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Thank you! I started scribbling this piece of nonsense for the Fable competition - and then found out it was closed... Duh!
Steve
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i created a challenge to write a fable so maybe it was that...
Comment from nomi338
Priceless. The old royal pun reappears and has never been funnier. This poem gives so much delight that I cannot even begin to tell you. Let it suffice to say that I will be laughing for a long time to come, every time I think about the clever story told in this delightful rhyme.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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Priceless. The old royal pun reappears and has never been funnier. This poem gives so much delight that I cannot even begin to tell you. Let it suffice to say that I will be laughing for a long time to come, every time I think about the clever story told in this delightful rhyme.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the great review and the six stars! I started scribbling this piece of nonsense for the Fable competition - and then found out it was closed... Duh!
Steve
Comment from cvcopac
This is almost as good as "The Skunk" poem and maybe it is.
exciting narrative wrote entirely in limerick format, snaps, crackles, and pops. Fables too. A nice one Kiwisteveh.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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This is almost as good as "The Skunk" poem and maybe it is.
exciting narrative wrote entirely in limerick format, snaps, crackles, and pops. Fables too. A nice one Kiwisteveh.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2012
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Thank you! I started scribbling this piece of nonsense for the Fable competition - and then found out it was closed... Duh!
Funny what you remember - I had to really strain my memory to recall any poem I had written that had a skunk in it...
Steve
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Yes it should have been a contest entry. Frank--I'll never forget frank.
