Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

your flashback was wow Herb...
deep and somber so very heartbreaking
closing .. even more compelling how
I wish I could help the little boy in the story
thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2012

Thanks for reading, glad it pulled at the strings, that is of course the point. :)

Comment from xxjsfuncxxxity

Excellent

Well this one oughta raise a few concerned eyebrows around here, mate! I could really relate to this one, having grown up in the eye of a similar shit-storm. God a'mighty, how da fuck do people survive? I really liked especially the little boy's voice in this one, that innocent, child-like pov. Well done, and a versatile departure from the other great fare. Well done!

Keep going with this stuff. It seems you're onto something strong. Wish I had a sicker, I mean a sixer... haha

cheers
js

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2012

Thanks, JS, I'm glad you picked up on the innocence, exactly what I was going for. :) Maybe if it ever gets finished, I'm like a third done, then I might have something worth reading at the end. If not, then i'll try harder the next time. :)