Comment from LucyB

Excellent

Okay, I know for sure I read this chapter out of sinq but it's okay. Now I am completely steady for the pocket chapter. This one is good as a set up to what's about to happen. Good work.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2012

Thanks for stocking with us!

Comment from bowls

Excellent

Such an exciting point at which to stop! Obviously, the reader will be anticipating the revelation of what's inside.
Nice bit of humour added here and more appreciation for James and his friends who seem to be showing themselves to be very useful. In paragraph four, perhaps "which was an apple producer" should be "who was...." An excellent post. Well written and very action packed.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2012

Thanks again for your very welcome and needed support and advice.

Comment from ScarletClearwater

Excellent

So a message through a crack about iron balls? Interesting. He he, I liked this piece. Good length and the pace was nice and strong.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2012

Thank you for your review and continued reading.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

strong closing here .. indeed the whole read was great
well written and expressed like always
looking forward to the next read
thanks so much for sharing

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2012

thanks for your ever-faithful words of encouragement.