The Eden Tree
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Comment from bowls
Some nice advances in this bit. You do a good job of giving background information to explain various events of the past. Guess I was wrong about Aly, after all. I'm really not much of a detective. I'm looking forward to reading about what these suspects have to say.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Some nice advances in this bit. You do a good job of giving background information to explain various events of the past. Guess I was wrong about Aly, after all. I'm really not much of a detective. I'm looking forward to reading about what these suspects have to say.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thank you once again for some kind words and perceptive comments
Comment from Hoteptheartist
This is great synopsis page. I feel like a lot of the answers came out here in this selection. There is something to be said about the acquisition of evidence and the hush aroudn how the hacked files we attained. I wondered if that evidence could be used. I do feel like at times the comprehension level of the reader has high expectations.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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This is great synopsis page. I feel like a lot of the answers came out here in this selection. There is something to be said about the acquisition of evidence and the hush aroudn how the hacked files we attained. I wondered if that evidence could be used. I do feel like at times the comprehension level of the reader has high expectations.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind award and words. Others too have suggested that I may overestimate the IT skills of my readers...perhaps before I consider publishing I will look at that.
Comment from Overthehill
Clever detective powers at work here. I liked the fact that it is good for a man to remain patient, even though I heartily disagree. One thing I might add; it might be a good idea to add a list of characters and a short explanation of who they were as I found myself reading it twice to try and figure. I shall follow on with this. Elaine
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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Clever detective powers at work here. I liked the fact that it is good for a man to remain patient, even though I heartily disagree. One thing I might add; it might be a good idea to add a list of characters and a short explanation of who they were as I found myself reading it twice to try and figure. I shall follow on with this. Elaine
Comment Written 03-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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Thanks for your kind words and helpful advice.