The Eden Tree
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Tel Aviv and Strasbourg"A family's need of a miracle is in a Box
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Comment from bowls
Very nice detail here, comparing the similarities between the British and Israelis insofar as display of emotion is concerned. You draw the conclusion that everyone feels the same way bringing the two sets of characters closer together in the reader's mind. You also have parallel news coverage here. This all seems to be very well balanced.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Very nice detail here, comparing the similarities between the British and Israelis insofar as display of emotion is concerned. You draw the conclusion that everyone feels the same way bringing the two sets of characters closer together in the reader's mind. You also have parallel news coverage here. This all seems to be very well balanced.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2012
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Thanks for your continuing reading and excellent comments
Comment from Hoteptheartist
Thank you for this very professional writing. The use of adjectives really stands out to me. Being that I haven't read the other parts of the story I was drawn in to wonder what I missed. I wanted to hear more of the distinct voices of the worried character and the rational character but I'm sure I would get to know them in the rest of the story.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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Thank you for this very professional writing. The use of adjectives really stands out to me. Being that I haven't read the other parts of the story I was drawn in to wonder what I missed. I wanted to hear more of the distinct voices of the worried character and the rational character but I'm sure I would get to know them in the rest of the story.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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thank you for your kind comments and rating. I appreciate everyone who has read any of my writing, and welcome new readers as it brings fresh insights.
Comment from Overthehill
Even though I hadn't read the previous chapters of this book, I was able to feel the kinds of emotions running through it. Poor Joseph's pain was obvious by your dialogue. I liked your descriptions of the water, all of which painted the picture and enabled me to be part of the crowd of onlookers. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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Even though I hadn't read the previous chapters of this book, I was able to feel the kinds of emotions running through it. Poor Joseph's pain was obvious by your dialogue. I liked your descriptions of the water, all of which painted the picture and enabled me to be part of the crowd of onlookers. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind review.