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The Heir Apparent

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A family learns their father is a serial killer

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Comment from adewpearl
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What a true friend and woman of grace Angela is, and what a brave woman Alfina is as she testifies to such terrible moments in her life. These are two remarkable women who totally come to life for me because of your exceptional character development. You really make me believe in your characters, Valerie, to the point I love them and care for them and cry for them. Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
    Thank you so much for your gracious and oh, so kind words. I too have begun to love these characters. I am still working on rewriting chapter 52 and then should be back on schedule.