Comment from DilRahmon

Excellent

The poem is as beautiful as the picture it associates with. My favorite line is:
I realize no picture will capture the exhilaration I feel at this moment.

You are right. but you know what, your poem did capture it (with the help of that picture) and, i assure you i felt (perhaps not in its entirety) what you felt.

thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2012

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful and encouraging review.
Connie

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, connie c, you did a great job writing this beautiful free verse about the wetlands you enjoy visiting. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2012

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.
Connie

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

So beautiful your free verse is and what a subject. Your use of colors is absolutely fantastic too. Oh how I can envision your wetland.

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2012

Thank you, Gungalo. I'm glad it was easy for you to envision my wetlands.
Connie

reply by Gungalo on 28-Jun-2012

My pleasure.