The Eden Tree
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Legal plans made"A family's need of a miracle is in a Box
5 total reviews
Comment from LucyB
You weave an interesting story. Your conversations are believable and you let us know exactly what is going in with out adding a lot of unneeded words. I like your writing g style. It is almost kind of casual. Very good!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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You weave an interesting story. Your conversations are believable and you let us know exactly what is going in with out adding a lot of unneeded words. I like your writing g style. It is almost kind of casual. Very good!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words.
Comment from mshirachot
Although I've not read any of your other chapters, or other writing on here...I am now looking forward to it. This sounds like the making of an excellent book, just from this chapter alone. It get's a five alone just for the intrigue it has created in me. There were no errors that I noticed right off. Hopefully, I can make it back to read the rest of the book.
Best wishes with your project!
Shalom and blessings!
Marsha
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Although I've not read any of your other chapters, or other writing on here...I am now looking forward to it. This sounds like the making of an excellent book, just from this chapter alone. It get's a five alone just for the intrigue it has created in me. There were no errors that I noticed right off. Hopefully, I can make it back to read the rest of the book.
Best wishes with your project!
Shalom and blessings!
Marsha
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I do hope that you can return and maybe catch up on my characters story.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
A good plan of high level crime had been proposed, pre-planned and all plans rehearsed and perfected; just about to be executed. There is a great grip of the story line that compel one to want more of it. Good work.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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A good plan of high level crime had been proposed, pre-planned and all plans rehearsed and perfected; just about to be executed. There is a great grip of the story line that compel one to want more of it. Good work.
ola thomas
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for your kind words. I do hope you continue to follow The Eden Tree.
Comment from bowls
You seem to have covered all the bases here. Everything seems to be taken care of in preparation for the flight. Suspense is rising here. Despite all the precautions, will something go wrong? The reader is anxious to get on with the trip and find out. Adding the date here is a nice touch, just to remind the reader of the time frame. I could be very wrong, but I'm still suspicious of Aly. I think she's getting too much information. Guess I'll just wait and see if I'm right or not.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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You seem to have covered all the bases here. Everything seems to be taken care of in preparation for the flight. Suspense is rising here. Despite all the precautions, will something go wrong? The reader is anxious to get on with the trip and find out. Adding the date here is a nice touch, just to remind the reader of the time frame. I could be very wrong, but I'm still suspicious of Aly. I think she's getting too much information. Guess I'll just wait and see if I'm right or not.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thanks for your generous following of my novel. Your support means loads.
Comment from mr elis
The reader hopes a trip planed in advance should be enjoyed to the maximum regardless what comes about.Death, one thinks would be the reason of not accomplishing that trip to Israel.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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The reader hopes a trip planed in advance should be enjoyed to the maximum regardless what comes about.Death, one thinks would be the reason of not accomplishing that trip to Israel.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for reading my chapter.