Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Tears"A collection of poetry.
6 total reviews
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
I guess I need to come read and review the rest of these at some point. I feel like such a slacker.
Good stuff here, Ric. Nice and tight and clean with glinty edges.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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I guess I need to come read and review the rest of these at some point. I feel like such a slacker.
Good stuff here, Ric. Nice and tight and clean with glinty edges.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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HA.... you are addressing the biggest slacker in the world. I show up, write a few things, then disapear into the great blue yonder! LOL Thanks again!
Comment from SweetSketch
What a great poem! It translates to me perfectly how the character is feeling. It has a good rhythm to it, and is very descriptive. Short but sweet, as they say.
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What a great poem! It translates to me perfectly how the character is feeling. It has a good rhythm to it, and is very descriptive. Short but sweet, as they say.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from StormyGale
Well, again you prove yourself a poet worthy of applause!
Glad to see I am the 1st to review this. I feel that others that wander here will be as pleased as me.
I hope you are planning on a book.
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Well, again you prove yourself a poet worthy of applause!
Glad to see I am the 1st to review this. I feel that others that wander here will be as pleased as me.
I hope you are planning on a book.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from agentpony
I really liked this poem. It sounded very authentic and genuine. I personally would like even more images and at some points the rhyming scheme sounds a little bit forced. Overall though, it is a really touching poem.
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I really liked this poem. It sounded very authentic and genuine. I personally would like even more images and at some points the rhyming scheme sounds a little bit forced. Overall though, it is a really touching poem.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from Kingsland
excellent, this has great poetic form
wonderfully flowing
your rhyme is right on
or should i say solid
sixties talk
and your poem is far out
groovey
.....Bob Dylan ....oh no my name is.... John Allen Kingsland
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excellent, this has great poetic form
wonderfully flowing
your rhyme is right on
or should i say solid
sixties talk
and your poem is far out
groovey
.....Bob Dylan ....oh no my name is.... John Allen Kingsland
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from EmileJP
This is very good ...it pours out the emotions like thick syrup. The message is well presented and the words mean something, ....something wonderful! Heart felt feelings from a man with a sad heart. Good work.
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This is very good ...it pours out the emotions like thick syrup. The message is well presented and the words mean something, ....something wonderful! Heart felt feelings from a man with a sad heart. Good work.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005