The Eden Tree
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Hilton Hotel: Tel Aviv"A family's need of a miracle is in a Box
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Comment from Torrence Winter
Good characterization and narration on part of your main character. You have set the stage for a terrific story. The flow of the words held me until the last sentence. I am looking forward to reading more from you.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2012
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Good characterization and narration on part of your main character. You have set the stage for a terrific story. The flow of the words held me until the last sentence. I am looking forward to reading more from you.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2012
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Thanks for your kind words and comment.
Comment from bowls
This was quite an exciting one. Your Sean Casey arrives just in the nick of time to save the day. I'm glad you included an explanation for his being there or it would have seemed terribly contrived. Sean adds a nice touch of humour to your story and allows for some political commentary, I see. Can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2012
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This was quite an exciting one. Your Sean Casey arrives just in the nick of time to save the day. I'm glad you included an explanation for his being there or it would have seemed terribly contrived. Sean adds a nice touch of humour to your story and allows for some political commentary, I see. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2012
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Thank you for your kind words and continuing support.