Wake Up Sleepy Head
short free verse15 total reviews
Comment from TammyGail
How cute :) i really liked your free verse
it was whimsical and creative
lovely use of imagery and you
expressed well throughout
thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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How cute :) i really liked your free verse
it was whimsical and creative
lovely use of imagery and you
expressed well throughout
thanks for sharing
Comment Written 16-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from jshep
a very fun poem with nice flow and that spot of rhyme that brings it together. Love the last line 'although I could swear I heard a giggle.' I remember being awakened in the same way.
excellent job and best of luck. J
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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a very fun poem with nice flow and that spot of rhyme that brings it together. Love the last line 'although I could swear I heard a giggle.' I remember being awakened in the same way.
excellent job and best of luck. J
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from Meta~Mark
a nice little bedtime story here..maybe my body clocks my life and nothing more But sometimes out of the corner of my eye, like these lines and excellent
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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a nice little bedtime story here..maybe my body clocks my life and nothing more But sometimes out of the corner of my eye, like these lines and excellent
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from venika
This one is a really nice poem... This free-verse poem flows really well. I think it's a lovely poem, and I especially like the last line.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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This one is a really nice poem... This free-verse poem flows really well. I think it's a lovely poem, and I especially like the last line.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem and for the 6 star rating. I appreciate it very much. F _ :)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This was a nice read and well penned.
I loved your ending of this "moment" with a giggle. Made me smile too:)
Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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This was a nice read and well penned.
I loved your ending of this "moment" with a giggle. Made me smile too:)
Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your delightful, fanciful poem is well-written and expresses that with the earthly, there is a little touch
of the ethereal. Good
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Your delightful, fanciful poem is well-written and expresses that with the earthly, there is a little touch
of the ethereal. Good
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from ennahanid
Love the words of your Wake Up Sleepy Head and think you rose well to the contest. Loved the sense of fun and the last line is a gem. It was a pleasure to read and I thank you - Dinah
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Love the words of your Wake Up Sleepy Head and think you rose well to the contest. Loved the sense of fun and the last line is a gem. It was a pleasure to read and I thank you - Dinah
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a fun poem about personifying the to rise on time with someone who helps do that. It's like a Sandman in reverse. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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This is a fun poem about personifying the to rise on time with someone who helps do that. It's like a Sandman in reverse. Nice.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your free verse poem is beautifully written with fantastic imagery. The art work is gorgeous you used of VMarguarite. Your free verse poem is creative with excellent allitetation, very fine use of metaphor , great descriptive writing, good meter and rhythm. I enjoyed your lines: "But sometimes out of the corner of my eye, a wisp of white feathers float to earth I would turn suddenly to try to catch them only to realize it was my imagination although I could swear I heard a giggle" I love your free verse poem. I wish you good luck in the Free Verse Poetry writing prompt contest. I will recommend your poem to other reviewers. Lovely day to you.
Missy.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Poet,
Your free verse poem is beautifully written with fantastic imagery. The art work is gorgeous you used of VMarguarite. Your free verse poem is creative with excellent allitetation, very fine use of metaphor , great descriptive writing, good meter and rhythm. I enjoyed your lines: "But sometimes out of the corner of my eye, a wisp of white feathers float to earth I would turn suddenly to try to catch them only to realize it was my imagination although I could swear I heard a giggle" I love your free verse poem. I wish you good luck in the Free Verse Poetry writing prompt contest. I will recommend your poem to other reviewers. Lovely day to you.
Missy.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Missy, thank you for the review and the wonderful comments. F_ :)
Comment from mystery poet
Reminds me of a song by Charlie Pride, Kiss An Angle Good morning. Not one you have heard if your younger than me.
I like this free verse, job well done. It is true to form
and I took pleasure in writing this review!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Reminds me of a song by Charlie Pride, Kiss An Angle Good morning. Not one you have heard if your younger than me.
I like this free verse, job well done. It is true to form
and I took pleasure in writing this review!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
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My pleasure!
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My pleasure!