Comment from Lainee

Excellent

Hi Jewell,

This is truly beautiful. How can you touch someone who just doesn't want to be helped though? Wish i knew. I love the picture you have chosen to highlight your wonderful thoughts.

Thanks for sharing,
Lainee :)

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2005

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is truly beautiful. You have chosen a very spiritual visual image to convey your message to the reader. There are a lot of people who are in need of a helping hand. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2005

Comment from Graceheart

Excellent

This feels as if you are giving a message of hope to a passed love, someone who never listened enough! Thank you for sharing such a tender and caring piece about Salvation! HE is ever so close to any soul who calls HIS Name! Thank you lovely One!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2005

Comment from ladykay

Excellent

Hi,

This is a great piece of motivating poetry. The only problem is the person should want to be helped.

However hope it inspires a lot of people out there who need it.

A very good job.

ladykay

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2005

Comment from #1GRANDMA

Excellent

I know someone that fits this poem. It sad when people do not see or hear what they should. I printed this to send to her,hoping it will help. Thanks

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2005

Comment from Cosette

Excellent

Well, ma'am, I've got to say, this is one of the best pieces I've ever read of yours. You are reaching for new ground here and I don't know if that is an artistic effort or just the sincerity of your words to whomever you are trying to reach here. Either way....I think you have found your calling.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from Grace King

Excellent

Jewell,
No need for prose, this is sheer poetry. Free-verse offers the wonderful benefit of flowing expressionism. This piece offered us a continuous thought with a very profound message. Thank you for sharing this gem.
all my best
flo

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from fly4hi

Excellent

This is fine in poetry as free verse. A very perceptive
look through lost eyes. Also a very realistic welcome
from The One beyond the veil. That hand is always
there waiting for us to reach for it. Sadly, great numbers
of people today refuse to reach up. :} fly

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from oldpro

Excellent

Aw yes the angel speaks to whom will hear,
Sad though most times there song
falls on deaf ears,
left to weep the crying peers.
Who must go on without them near.
Their souls will rest in peaceful sleep
We know that God forgives their deeds
I've lost a friend to this thing
How I wish I could make them see
On life support I saw them last
A junkies life is really sad
I think of him from time to time
I hope you poem will open eyes!!!


great job Jewell,,,

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from made2soar

Excellent

Great picture with your well written and powerful message. There is hope if you will listen. The only way to be successful is to fail first. Thanks, Jim

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005