Days of Grace
Quatern17 total reviews
Comment from faithin01
Wow! You're a natural. Got a gift you do. No errors in punctuation or grammer, excellant picture, great words to describe the message of the title you chose. Good Job!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Wow! You're a natural. Got a gift you do. No errors in punctuation or grammer, excellant picture, great words to describe the message of the title you chose. Good Job!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for the very kind review and stars!!! Debbie
Comment from deb552
This is another wonderful poem about love. The rhyming and rhythm is spot on, and I like the repetition of the line, 'every day should be met with grace.' It pulls all your thoughts together. I also like the message I'm getting that we need to live in the present, rather than worrying about what may happen. The here and now, is what counts and 'should be met with grace!" Thanks for sharing! xxx deb
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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This is another wonderful poem about love. The rhyming and rhythm is spot on, and I like the repetition of the line, 'every day should be met with grace.' It pulls all your thoughts together. I also like the message I'm getting that we need to live in the present, rather than worrying about what may happen. The here and now, is what counts and 'should be met with grace!" Thanks for sharing! xxx deb
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Living in the present can be a challenge, but it does get easier with practice. Glad you liked this one!!! Debbie
Comment from MumEsGirl
Yes the artwork is great, but the poetry is pretty amazing too.
This speaks of a true and abiding love that makes life a sweeter place.
The word 'grace' isnt used much but I love its suggestion of all things soft and serene
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Yes the artwork is great, but the poetry is pretty amazing too.
This speaks of a true and abiding love that makes life a sweeter place.
The word 'grace' isnt used much but I love its suggestion of all things soft and serene
hugs
kate
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for the awesome review!!! debbie
Comment from geetika sethi
LOVELY INDEED..SO BEAUTIFULLY YOU HAVE WRITTEN THIS POEM ..INDEED A DAY OF GRACE IS ALL WE WISH FOR ..AND WONDERFULLY YOU HAVE DESCRIPTED WHAT ALL OCCURS WHEN WE HAVE AND ATTAIN DAYS OF GRACE.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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LOVELY INDEED..SO BEAUTIFULLY YOU HAVE WRITTEN THIS POEM ..INDEED A DAY OF GRACE IS ALL WE WISH FOR ..AND WONDERFULLY YOU HAVE DESCRIPTED WHAT ALL OCCURS WHEN WE HAVE AND ATTAIN DAYS OF GRACE.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for the awesome review!!! debbie
Comment from Starlit Ink
Every day should indeed be met with grace, and the repetition in this style of poem worked well to emphasize that lovely thought. I enjoyed the expression of not only being true to your love but also to yourself. Great work :)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Every day should indeed be met with grace, and the repetition in this style of poem worked well to emphasize that lovely thought. I enjoyed the expression of not only being true to your love but also to yourself. Great work :)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for the awesome review!!! debbie
Comment from Melspoems
There is a very inspiring message within your well written quatern, especially in your repeating line, which fits smoothly into each stanza.
The flow is smooth throughout and nice strong rhyming couplets in each quatrain.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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There is a very inspiring message within your well written quatern, especially in your repeating line, which fits smoothly into each stanza.
The flow is smooth throughout and nice strong rhyming couplets in each quatrain.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed!!! Debbie
Comment from Chris Tee
Debbie this quatern poem titled "Days of Grace" is an absolutely graceful piece of poetry. You are spot-on with the form here. Well done indeed ma'am. This is real upbeat and excellent!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Debbie this quatern poem titled "Days of Grace" is an absolutely graceful piece of poetry. You are spot-on with the form here. Well done indeed ma'am. This is real upbeat and excellent!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed!!! Debbie
Comment from ameen786
Debbie my friend, this is a brilliant composition with a beautiful and wise message and by using the cursive font you made this quite personal enhancing the appeal/charm of the poem, lovely verses in excellent rhyme and rhythm, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Debbie my friend, this is a brilliant composition with a beautiful and wise message and by using the cursive font you made this quite personal enhancing the appeal/charm of the poem, lovely verses in excellent rhyme and rhythm, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed!!! Debbie
Comment from Maria C.
You selected a great repeating line and it is used well in each quatrain without being forced. I like your message too.
Your repeating line however only has seven syllables and it it my understanding that a quatern has eight syllables in each line. You could say, "Every day should be met with grace." Even so it is just beautiful and so is the picture.
Blessings,
Maria C.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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You selected a great repeating line and it is used well in each quatrain without being forced. I like your message too.
Your repeating line however only has seven syllables and it it my understanding that a quatern has eight syllables in each line. You could say, "Every day should be met with grace." Even so it is just beautiful and so is the picture.
Blessings,
Maria C.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for pointing that out. I have corrected it. Thanks for the kind and thoughtful review!!! Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
I love the quatern Debbie and yours is beautiful. Nice repeat lines and a wonderful theme, of course, love. Thanks girl for writing this one.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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I love the quatern Debbie and yours is beautiful. Nice repeat lines and a wonderful theme, of course, love. Thanks girl for writing this one.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed!!! Debbie