Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

I enjoyed this romantic poem. I felt that it flowed quite well and expresses sentiments that we can all relate to. A very enjoyable room.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2005

Comment from EmileJP

Excellent

Good use of word choices to draw the reader into your puppy love story. It's somewhat original and has a pleasant flow in it's pace. This reads as a beautiful tribute to the person you love. You gather all the loving memories important in your life and surround yourself with their love. The magic that exist in your life is personified in the closeness you feel with your lover, soul mate, husband and best friend all in one treasure .

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2005

Comment from Nescher Pyscher

Excellent

All together now,

"Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

:0D

A sweet piece, Ric. I liked it, being the incurable, hopeless romantic I am. :0)

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

this poem i found to have everything right about it
and nothing wrong
it had good flow
and it is very poetic
thank you for posting
..............John

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2005

Comment from G. Walters

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It was easy to read and flowed very nicely. The description of how "you know you found love" was wonderfully expressed. Thank you for such a wonderful read.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2005

Comment from islandergirl

Excellent

Very polished and very beautiful. This is an interesting way to view dreams.
You made it so personal. Terrific. Good work.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2005