Comment from kra-z-ka-z

Excellent

This tells such a sweet story in such a tiny place! But I guess that's the whole idea huh. I absolutely enjoyed reading this piece over and over again. Can't say that about too many!!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012

Thank You very much!!! That that is a greatly appreciated compliment and review. I will have to stop in and read some of your words sometime. ~Vincent~

Comment from snemes

Excellent

It may not have come easily, but you succeeded. This is well-written. I like the image of the lost spark being ignited with embers from a heart.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2012

Thank You very much for your thoughtful review. I truly appreciate your insight. ~Vincent~

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

You light a lost spark
You pour embers from your heart
You're fire in the dark

Really good, Vincent.. I'm
always amazed how so few words
can speak volumes.

good luck with the contest

Margaret

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thank you very much Margaret. I appreciate your kind words. It took me a minute, but I got it...I think. LOL ~Vincent~

Comment from poesyapprentice

Excellent

I liked it. Great first attempt! The picture was perfect, the overall presentation lovely. If this is your first one then I'd love to see more of them from you. Good luck in the contest. Blessings

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thank you very much for this generous review. I have many more written & as soon as I'm a full member, there will be more to come. I appreciate you taking the time to read my little write. ~Vincent~

reply by poesyapprentice on 22-Aug-2012

Looking forward to it!

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks again!

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Excellent 5-7-5 expressing what a lover can do. It is amazing how another person can spark a cold heart and create a blazing fire. Your poem is powerful. Great job.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thank you so very much for the awesome review. I humbles me when I am able to touch someone, in a special way. ~Vincent~

Comment from juliedickson55

Excellent

Nice 5-7-5.
I wouldn't have known that it was your first Haiku attempt.

The graphic well compliments the subject of your poem too.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thank you very much. I truly appreciate your kind words. ~Vincent~

Comment from Mimsy.Butler

Good

Very nice first attempt. 5-7-5 format isn't as easy as it would seem. I felt the warmth of a new love awakening a cold heart.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks you very much, for your kind review. ~Vincent~

Comment from Opal H.

Excellent

Haikus are tough stuff. You've nailed it here - great imagery of the fire (it almost radiates with heat) and brilliant description on the effect that special someone has on you.

Great job, and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012

Thanks you very much for your humbling review. I truly appreciate you reading my little write. It's not easy for me to write short poems, because I have so much to get out, with so little amount of words to use. I am happy that I found the right words this time.

reply by Opal H. on 11-Aug-2012

You sure did. Once you get the hang of it, it works out. It was a really good haiku :)

Comment from Eliane Rabello

Excellent

Hi, there, Vincent! Hope you don't mind my reviewing it this late. I've been swamped with work. Such short, simple and yet thought-provoking poem you wrote! I just loved it for it sparked fire in me. Don't you just love it when you read something that makes you stop and reflect? That's what you just did! Your poem was above all food for thought for me.

Thanks for sharing and being here.

Keep up this great work!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012

Thank You so very much for such a thoughtful & touching review. I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read my little write & I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. ~Vincent Phelps!

reply by Eliane Rabello on 05-Aug-2012

You're most welcome, Vincent! Thanks for the kindness of the review vote.

Comment from Jaxson Phoenix

Excellent

It is a wonderful thing when we can find someone who can ignite our fire with their embers and fan the flames of passion. Nice work. Good luck to you.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2012