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Comment from Janice Canerdy
To me, your well-written, thought-provoking poem advises one not to go through life afraid to try something new--but not to be too hasty in doing so. (??) Very good poem
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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To me, your well-written, thought-provoking poem advises one not to go through life afraid to try something new--but not to be too hasty in doing so. (??) Very good poem
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting. The poem is addressed to someone very close to me that has an addiction that has stolen and is stealing his health.
Comment from dmt1967
I liked this poem a lot it flowed off the tongue and I thought it was written very well I liked the picture and I enjoyed reading it thank you
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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I liked this poem a lot it flowed off the tongue and I thought it was written very well I liked the picture and I enjoyed reading it thank you
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting.
Comment from Crackerberries
I really enjoyed this read today. It is so true the path to righteousness is not going to be easy... but that is the path to stay on. Great bit of work went into this one I can tell. Thanks for sharing it and the artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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I really enjoyed this read today. It is so true the path to righteousness is not going to be easy... but that is the path to stay on. Great bit of work went into this one I can tell. Thanks for sharing it and the artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting.
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was very creative very original piece also a very unique piece,brilliantly done integrated imagery excellent A little bit cryptic but well done Good Reality Full of action There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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I thought this was very creative very original piece also a very unique piece,brilliantly done integrated imagery excellent A little bit cryptic but well done Good Reality Full of action There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting.
Comment from guinea
I like this very much. Be true to yourself. I try to do that. The words flow nicely and firmly. The imagery is great. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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I like this very much. Be true to yourself. I try to do that. The words flow nicely and firmly. The imagery is great. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting.
Comment from greece1998
Generally, as a person i like poems that rhyme and they are fun to read!!!!!!! i even dance and this one was one of the poems that made me think that the world is lucky to have such talented poets like yourself!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Generally, as a person i like poems that rhyme and they are fun to read!!!!!!! i even dance and this one was one of the poems that made me think that the world is lucky to have such talented poets like yourself!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the very kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read the poem and commenting. Thanks for the 6th star too!
Comment from simonbagh
From all the trappings in the world
Which bring about such turmoil.
Look within for something true,
Make the change to something new
It seems that you have known where the way goes, so go on living yours in your own way, an honest theme, and well written, well done, Simon.
Living life to the full, naught better than this
No way to describe it but breathtaking bliss.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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From all the trappings in the world
Which bring about such turmoil.
Look within for something true,
Make the change to something new
It seems that you have known where the way goes, so go on living yours in your own way, an honest theme, and well written, well done, Simon.
Living life to the full, naught better than this
No way to describe it but breathtaking bliss.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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I appreciate you taking the time to read the poem and commenting
Comment from pharp
What an awesome poem delivering a great message. This poem has a very nice and smooth flow; the rhyming was on point and a great selection of artwork. My favorite are the second and last stanzas. Thanks for sharing such an awesome and profound read.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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What an awesome poem delivering a great message. This poem has a very nice and smooth flow; the rhyming was on point and a great selection of artwork. My favorite are the second and last stanzas. Thanks for sharing such an awesome and profound read.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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I appreciate you taking the time to read the poem and commenting
Comment from kleinifer
This is a perfect sandwich of the implied relatively good and bad qualities of man.
A lot of issues were brought into my mind as I read this poem of yours.
I can never say that I wade through this poem because it is not dull at all.
The illustration but freaks me out! =D
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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This is a perfect sandwich of the implied relatively good and bad qualities of man.
A lot of issues were brought into my mind as I read this poem of yours.
I can never say that I wade through this poem because it is not dull at all.
The illustration but freaks me out! =D
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2012
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I appreciate you taking the time to read the poem and commenting
Comment from justchillin
This is an amazing poem. I resonate with it so much. The message you give, is deeply encouraging. We can be so happy if we change the way we think, perceive, and react. We are all where we are supposed to be as you say, and despite our worry moments things will turn out exactly as they were going too. Thank you for sharing this, and all the hard work you have obviously put into it. Well done xx
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012
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This is an amazing poem. I resonate with it so much. The message you give, is deeply encouraging. We can be so happy if we change the way we think, perceive, and react. We are all where we are supposed to be as you say, and despite our worry moments things will turn out exactly as they were going too. Thank you for sharing this, and all the hard work you have obviously put into it. Well done xx
Comment Written 03-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2012
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Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate you reading the poem and commenting
