Hyacinths
Haiku7 total reviews
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I am glad you made it a large portion of your work. THese flowers need to speak for themselves. Your comments brought out the good part of the lower. They are tubular and they smell great .Great work,
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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I love the picture. I am glad you made it a large portion of your work. THese flowers need to speak for themselves. Your comments brought out the good part of the lower. They are tubular and they smell great .Great work,
Comment Written 02-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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Thank you :)
Comment from ameen786
sunnilicious my friend, Hyacinths are desirable indeed; do you know that the flower is named after a Greek god called Hyacinthus? You captured the essence of this beauty in the haiku and the picture's perfect!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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sunnilicious my friend, Hyacinths are desirable indeed; do you know that the flower is named after a Greek god called Hyacinthus? You captured the essence of this beauty in the haiku and the picture's perfect!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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actually, i grew up in florida. my parents only had a rose garden, some orchids and a bell lillies bush. and now, i only get what they have at the supermarket. but that hyacinths painting is beautiful. thanks for the history lesson. also, thank you for the review. You're nice.
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed the echoing sounds in your tiny 5-7-5 and the vivid description of the hyacinths. The artwork you chose enhances your words as well. -Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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I enjoyed the echoing sounds in your tiny 5-7-5 and the vivid description of the hyacinths. The artwork you chose enhances your words as well. -Joan
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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thanks
Comment from Lobengula
This is another lovely word illustration. They are such lovely flowers, aren't they? The only thing, love, is that I'm not sure what you mean by 'tout'. Do you perhaps mean taut? I think this would make more sense. But you captured the essence of the flowers beautifully. Well done. Mike
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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This is another lovely word illustration. They are such lovely flowers, aren't they? The only thing, love, is that I'm not sure what you mean by 'tout'. Do you perhaps mean taut? I think this would make more sense. But you captured the essence of the flowers beautifully. Well done. Mike
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Tout is one-syllable for honorable and promote. You're nice. Thank you.
Comment from Titanx9
I like Haikus because they force me to really concentrate on what was in the writer's mind when he or she writes a piece. This Haiku paints a beautiful picture of hybrid hyacinths. They are indeed desirable and lovely. Nicely done and the artwork is apropos.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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I like Haikus because they force me to really concentrate on what was in the writer's mind when he or she writes a piece. This Haiku paints a beautiful picture of hybrid hyacinths. They are indeed desirable and lovely. Nicely done and the artwork is apropos.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you
Comment from Patti R.
Tout? Tout? Did you mean taut? Or am I missing something. This little haiku is packed with sex appeal, and double entendre, I just don't get the first word. Please explain! If you care to. patti r.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Tout? Tout? Did you mean taut? Or am I missing something. This little haiku is packed with sex appeal, and double entendre, I just don't get the first word. Please explain! If you care to. patti r.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Tout means to talk up, honor and/or promote. You're nice. Thanks for the review.
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Oh of course! thank you!
Comment from gazzagodbod
love this one sunnilicious love the picture and the presentation and your words bring it to life great work my friend gazzagodbod
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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love this one sunnilicious love the picture and the presentation and your words bring it to life great work my friend gazzagodbod
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you