Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Just Once..."A collection of poetry.
5 total reviews
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
Before we say goodby(goodbye)
Okay.
Not as sparklingly wonderful as some of the other pieces contained within, but not bad, either. Just kinda a nice poem. :0)
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Before we say goodby(goodbye)
Okay.
Not as sparklingly wonderful as some of the other pieces contained within, but not bad, either. Just kinda a nice poem. :0)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from fastdigits
A beautiful poem of love for someone special. Your words flow and have meaning throughout the poem. You have captured everything anyone would want to hear in such a short space.
Well done.
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A beautiful poem of love for someone special. Your words flow and have meaning throughout the poem. You have captured everything anyone would want to hear in such a short space.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2005
Comment from shelley kaye
this was really good
"just one more.........."
beautifully written
totally understandable
and relatable
nice flow and rhythm
thanx for sharing
:-)
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this was really good
"just one more.........."
beautifully written
totally understandable
and relatable
nice flow and rhythm
thanx for sharing
:-)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2005
Comment from Kingsland
i have not read very many of your poems
but this one is just outstanding
it has great flow it was just an easy read
i loved it
...............John
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i have not read very many of your poems
but this one is just outstanding
it has great flow it was just an easy read
i loved it
...............John
Comment Written 21-Feb-2005
Comment from mheflin
this is sweet and beggy it becomes you it turn out well and i liked it. i hope you get good reviews on it and keep on writing because i enjoyed this piece. Great Job!
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this is sweet and beggy it becomes you it turn out well and i liked it. i hope you get good reviews on it and keep on writing because i enjoyed this piece. Great Job!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2005