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Lorraine26 total reviews
Comment from Knighteagle
Very nice. An easy read with great imagery. Great flow and rhythm with a good rhyme scheme. Paints a clear picture in the readers mind. Clearly you are one that enjoys the outdoors and nature. Keep up the good work.
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Very nice. An easy read with great imagery. Great flow and rhythm with a good rhyme scheme. Paints a clear picture in the readers mind. Clearly you are one that enjoys the outdoors and nature. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I was on your nature walk with you and could feel the atmosphere filled with the thriving throng of creatures going about their business, a wonderful feast of natures treasures all in one poem, love Dolly x
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I was on your nature walk with you and could feel the atmosphere filled with the thriving throng of creatures going about their business, a wonderful feast of natures treasures all in one poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
Comment from Realist101
Lovely post Alex...My name is Susan or Sue, but know this isn't me...but still, no matter. I love the photo too. Really refreshing especially since it's spring here too. Or is it winter there? :)
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Lovely post Alex...My name is Susan or Sue, but know this isn't me...but still, no matter. I love the photo too. Really refreshing especially since it's spring here too. Or is it winter there? :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this lovely poem about being surrounded by the beauty of nature. Your words took me to the very throne you described, and I could see, feel, and even smell the surrounding wooded scene. The waterfall is lovely, and I wish I could visit this weekend, but its a long ways away,
~patty~
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thank you for sharing this lovely poem about being surrounded by the beauty of nature. Your words took me to the very throne you described, and I could see, feel, and even smell the surrounding wooded scene. The waterfall is lovely, and I wish I could visit this weekend, but its a long ways away,
~patty~
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem of life and a secret place where we canescape from daily tasks even just for a while will we rewind the mind and energize the body to do everything again.
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A very well-written poem of life and a secret place where we canescape from daily tasks even just for a while will we rewind the mind and energize the body to do everything again.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, how truly lovely. Exactly as I feel when I watch birds, butterflies, nature...I fly with them, I feel the wind on my leaves, I am the water in the stream. Your poem makes one feel quite poetic! Blessings...
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Oh, how truly lovely. Exactly as I feel when I watch birds, butterflies, nature...I fly with them, I feel the wind on my leaves, I am the water in the stream. Your poem makes one feel quite poetic! Blessings...
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good poem. The rhymes are perfect. My favorite line: I see myself play the life of a dragonfly,
as it wisps and darts flying low and high.
This takes me back to days on the farm. Watching the dragonflies dart about.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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A very good poem. The rhymes are perfect. My favorite line: I see myself play the life of a dragonfly,
as it wisps and darts flying low and high.
This takes me back to days on the farm. Watching the dragonflies dart about.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank You
Alex
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Thank You
Alex
Comment from kahpot
An excellent read and poem it took and showed me all the wonders of every day that (like me) most of us miss or cannot be bothered to acknowledge I found this poem to be a great read and story than you****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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An excellent read and poem it took and showed me all the wonders of every day that (like me) most of us miss or cannot be bothered to acknowledge I found this poem to be a great read and story than you****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank You
Alex
Comment from royowen
A beautifully composed and scribed work, that highlights what we should all notice, the sheer gentle beauty that is exuded by the wonder of native and it's inhabitants, the beauty of the visage and the sounds emanating from it. Sweetly written in highly descriptive imagery in the the smooth, eloquent brush strokes f the verbal artist, in aabb rhyming, quatrained essence. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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A beautifully composed and scribed work, that highlights what we should all notice, the sheer gentle beauty that is exuded by the wonder of native and it's inhabitants, the beauty of the visage and the sounds emanating from it. Sweetly written in highly descriptive imagery in the the smooth, eloquent brush strokes f the verbal artist, in aabb rhyming, quatrained essence. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank You
Alex
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Most welcome
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Wildwood's Secret Place' is a lovely poem.
It rhymes.
My favorite part: 'No longer in my own time zone,
Still, I guess there will be another day,
When I can sit and watch Nature play.'
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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'Wildwood's Secret Place' is a lovely poem.
It rhymes.
My favorite part: 'No longer in my own time zone,
Still, I guess there will be another day,
When I can sit and watch Nature play.'
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thank You
Alex