Comment from elizabethpryde

Excellent

such a true poem, we are the ones that fed hate and only our ability to relize this will put a stop to it.
I am so pleased to come across such a clever writer as you are, full of empathy when needed but always ready to point us on the right path. well done....elizabethpryde

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2005

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

this is excellent***** poeticly
it also has a message that needs to be heard
this is top notch
i bow before you
for you have written a great poem here
thank you
**************John Allen Kingsland******************

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2005

Comment from Nescher Pyscher

Good

Meeehhh . ..

You had a good, strong, tight premise here, but I wasn't nuts about what you then did with it. I mean, it's okay, I guess, but it doesn't have a sparkle.

It just kinda . .. rhymes . . .

Does that make sense?

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2005

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

A great poem beautifully expressed.

I love the analogy of the spider's web used throughout.

I certainly agree with your message. I think it is always better to forgive and so move on then the 'web' of hate ability to hate is deminished.

Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read. I hope you don't hate me for giving you five stars.LOL.

All the best Peter

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2005

Comment from Balladeer

Excellent

That was a really pleasant, insightful, inspirational, well balanced, smooth flowing piece of poetics. Was that anti-hate enough for ya... Great poem, obviously great message. Well done; Peace

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2005

Comment from Agrias0303

Excellent

Another awsome piece. I couln't find anything wrong with this one. The imagry was well written and stuck to the mind. Looking forwards to more from ya!
~Shanny

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2005