Life Is Just A Fantasy
Speculations of a dreamer37 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
Oops! I didn't quite get here on time but it appears you didn't need my vote anyway. This is excellent Susan. It's a rhyming, rhythmic prose that works so nicely. Smart piece!
Congratulations on the well deserved win.
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
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Oops! I didn't quite get here on time but it appears you didn't need my vote anyway. This is excellent Susan. It's a rhyming, rhythmic prose that works so nicely. Smart piece!
Congratulations on the well deserved win.
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
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Hi Judian! Thank you so much. Just to see you enjoyed this is worth a million. I'm always so thrilled and honored too, when you like my efforts! Wow! I'm so happy to hear from you...hugs and a smile! Susan
Comment from Joan E.
Even in prose, you are quite poetic. I enjoyed your "songs/tunes," "mystics" and "heartlights"--a neat coinage--metaphors. Best wishes in the soul contest. -Joan
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Even in prose, you are quite poetic. I enjoyed your "songs/tunes," "mystics" and "heartlights"--a neat coinage--metaphors. Best wishes in the soul contest. -Joan
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Hi there Joan. I'm honored that you like this and especially grateful to have a review from you! I shared a win for this and that's neat! It's a good contest! xoxo. Susan
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A win is a win! Congratulations!! Happy weekend- Joan
Comment from Cheryl Baker
This is an outstanding piece of writing. Written as prose but read like a beautiful poem. It is a truly lovely definition of a soul.
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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This is an outstanding piece of writing. Written as prose but read like a beautiful poem. It is a truly lovely definition of a soul.
Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 19-May-2012
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Hi Cheryl! Wow! Thank you and I'm really delighted you liked this so. It was an easy write as this is how I feel...But of course, who knows what's right? lol! Hugs and more thank you's!! :o)) Susan
Comment from justchillin
I so enjoyed reading your work. You described the soul so beautifully. I resonate with this so much. Great descriptions, bring this to life. I wish you good luck in the contest, thank you for sharing x
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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I so enjoyed reading your work. You described the soul so beautifully. I resonate with this so much. Great descriptions, bring this to life. I wish you good luck in the contest, thank you for sharing x
Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi and I send best wishes to you for a great week! I sure appreciate this review and also that you took a minute for me. I am sorry too, for another late thanks. NOT good. I'm trying! Love and smiles! Susan
Comment from tinams
This is a wonderful poem expressing your view of ones soul. And you have made a glorious job of it.I wish you luck in the contest :) Tina
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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This is a wonderful poem expressing your view of ones soul. And you have made a glorious job of it.I wish you luck in the contest :) Tina
Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi and I send best wishes to you for a great week! I sure appreciate this review and also that you took a minute for me. I am sorry too, for another late thanks. NOT good. I'm trying! Love and smiles! Susan
Comment from Judy Swanson
Susan, this is awesome! You describe it as fiction, maybe so, but it reads like a song with a powerful message in rhymes. I can almost hear the music - surely the soothing chords and softly swirling rhythm. Wonderfully done! I am soothed - and need to re-read several more times. Thanks for posting it and brightening my morning.
Judy
reply by the author on 14-May-2012
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Susan, this is awesome! You describe it as fiction, maybe so, but it reads like a song with a powerful message in rhymes. I can almost hear the music - surely the soothing chords and softly swirling rhythm. Wonderfully done! I am soothed - and need to re-read several more times. Thanks for posting it and brightening my morning.
Judy
Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 14-May-2012
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HI Judy! I'm just delighted you like this! Thank you so much for the kind and helpful enthusiasm. What a joy the responses to this have been!! HUGS ! Susan
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Well deserved joy in the responses! It was wonderful. Judy
Comment from fluffnstuff
what a beautiful,write my friend. haven't been with it, all inspration quiet for the time as my mom is dying on mothers day. just buried bobs mom two weeks ago. it just doesn't stop does it? keep in touch...love to you. pls give me your new address. di
reply by the author on 14-May-2012
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what a beautiful,write my friend. haven't been with it, all inspration quiet for the time as my mom is dying on mothers day. just buried bobs mom two weeks ago. it just doesn't stop does it? keep in touch...love to you. pls give me your new address. di
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 14-May-2012
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Hi Di! Wow!! Thank you so much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this and am glad you're back! I am sorry for the losses you suffer. It hurts so bad to lose our family members. I will pm you asap too! Love and hugs!! Susan
Comment from clarbare2
150 words, not much to work with but you did a fine job. Really appreciated the rhythm of the text. As a songwriter, I probably have more of an appreciation for the more subtle points.
The last sentence is a philosophical KEEPER!
Peace,
Barry
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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150 words, not much to work with but you did a fine job. Really appreciated the rhythm of the text. As a songwriter, I probably have more of an appreciation for the more subtle points.
The last sentence is a philosophical KEEPER!
Peace,
Barry
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi and I send best wishes to you for a great week! I sure appreciate this review and also that you took a minute for me. I am sorry too, for another late thanks. NOT good. I'm trying! Love and smiles! Susan
Comment from Sasha
A soul connects the heart and mind, and gives the sun it's shine. This is one of the best lines I have read in a lone time. I just love it and wish you all the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
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A soul connects the heart and mind, and gives the sun it's shine. This is one of the best lines I have read in a lone time. I just love it and wish you all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 18-May-2012
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Hi Sasha! How are you? Let me know how things are going. I sure appreciate that you liked this. Of course we cannot know what the heck we're really made of...? Until the day we have to go on to what may be next. I try not to dwell...but I do anyway. Thank you for the extra star too! hugs!! Susan
Comment from Dave M
Susan,
This is an excellent sketch of the spark all of us carry, along with many of our animals. I enjoyed reading this post and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Susan,
This is an excellent sketch of the spark all of us carry, along with many of our animals. I enjoyed reading this post and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2012
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Hi and I send best wishes to you for a great week! I sure appreciate this review and also that you took a minute for me. I am sorry too, for another late thanks. NOT good. I'm trying! Love and smiles! Susan
