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What's in a Name?

a children's story

22 total reviews 
Comment from PJJuarez
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This was a very cute story. It says a lot, hopefully no matter the name given, children start realizing they decide who they are. It reminds me of this girl I had in my class with her last name Steinke (pronounced Stanky). I don't think she put much thought after a while in what would people say and just acted as herself.

 Comment Written 15-May-2012


reply by the author on 15-May-2012
    So true! Kids are so very resilient (spelling?) Thank you so much for this thoughtful review, and for your valued insight!
Comment from joann r romei
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this is very cute and i will read it to my eight year old later, kids just love to say farty burpy and all those other lovely digqusting phrases

 Comment Written 15-May-2012


reply by the author on 15-May-2012
    Thank you so much for your encouraging and kind review!!
Comment from dmt1967
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I liked this story and it is right what's in a name lol it was funny but it also made me think a good children's story that well done

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 15-May-2012
    Thank you so much for stopping to read and review my story! So glad you liked it!
Comment from Janie King
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I've got a firend with twin 10 year old little girls and Alyssa inparticular would get a charge out of this story..she's a darling little girl that for some reason thinks farts are cool..beats me..this does make a very important point so i'd say you have succeed in your mission and done it well. God bless.

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 15-May-2012
    Wow! thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my little story!! Please let me know if Alyssa likes it...
Comment from zlp22
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What a cute story. Some people don't think when they when they name their children. They always want something different.

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 14-May-2012
    soooo true. thank you so much for stopping to review my story!
Comment from pharp
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What a great story. You did an excellent job in writing this great piece. I enjoyed the read and got a kick out of the their names. Great message to be learn what's in name anyway!!! You name does not define who you are.

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 14-May-2012
    Im so glad you stopped by to read and review my story.. and thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement!
Comment from keimosobie
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very funny. i can see the apeel for children and the moral it tries to teach. alt6hough had that been me i would be called mr doug.

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 14-May-2012
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review my little story and thank you for your kind words of encouragement!
Comment from tinams
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This is certainly a creative and original story. Fun to read, and I bet you had a good time writing it. I thoroughly enjoyed the read :) Tina

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 14-May-2012
    thank you so much, tina, for stopping by to read and review my little story. and thanks for your kind words of encouragement!
Comment from fionna barr
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That is a really sweet story and I think a lot of children will like it as they all delight in name calling and lavatory humour. My five-year old granddaughter will love this. Very imaginative

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 14-May-2012
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review my story.. and thanks for your kind words of encouragement!
Comment from guinea
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What is in a name anyway. Children can be cruel. I love thispiece. It teaches us not to judge one another. I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 14-May-2012


reply by the author on 14-May-2012
    Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement!