Human Nature
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Comment from alexisleech
You are so right, Sandra. It never fails to amaze me how many emotions can fill one head in the space of a few hours, sometimes going from elation to despair and back again with the wink of an eye. As you say, it only takes a look around us to get back the balance, especially if the words we might read rhyme as well as your delightful poetry! Alexis x
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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You are so right, Sandra. It never fails to amaze me how many emotions can fill one head in the space of a few hours, sometimes going from elation to despair and back again with the wink of an eye. As you say, it only takes a look around us to get back the balance, especially if the words we might read rhyme as well as your delightful poetry! Alexis x
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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thank you so much Alexis for your really lovely and kind words! xsx
Comment from Doc Holiday
Sometimes we expect too much of ourselves.
Soemtimes we just need to be ourselves and not try to be perfect, but just accepting of who we really are...
Relax and enjoy life one day at a time...
Nicely written!
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Sometimes we expect too much of ourselves.
Soemtimes we just need to be ourselves and not try to be perfect, but just accepting of who we really are...
Relax and enjoy life one day at a time...
Nicely written!
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Thank you, Doc Holiday, for your lovely review. I totally agree with you, perhaps if we did stop worrying about the little things, we would feel better in ourselves. xsx
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of Human Nature, Are you looking in my windows? I put my foot in my mouth all the time and for sure, then I want to cry. But there's no crying in my drama of life anymore. I just let things glide over my head and ignore the unnecessary hurtful things in life. Your poem is easy to read and well written with much knowledge about human nature. Carole
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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To the author of Human Nature, Are you looking in my windows? I put my foot in my mouth all the time and for sure, then I want to cry. But there's no crying in my drama of life anymore. I just let things glide over my head and ignore the unnecessary hurtful things in life. Your poem is easy to read and well written with much knowledge about human nature. Carole
Comment Written 05-May-2012
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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We do live in a hurtful world and it is good to be able to let it float over your head. I think most of us have to suffer until we have sorted out what are the important things in our lives and what needs to kicked out. Thank you for this really nice review and the very king comments.xsx
Comment from Alan K Pease
Clever rhyme for each stanza telling a story of response of a few measure of life positive and negative areas of reaction. The art on display is very informative of an adventure gone forward. Repeating the idea at the end of the passage was a good idea for the poem cycles back to the beginning.
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Clever rhyme for each stanza telling a story of response of a few measure of life positive and negative areas of reaction. The art on display is very informative of an adventure gone forward. Repeating the idea at the end of the passage was a good idea for the poem cycles back to the beginning.
Comment Written 05-May-2012
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review, Alan, I am so pleased you enjoyed it, thank you! xsx
Comment from ennahanid
This is really an excellent piece on 'human nature'. I now myself I have always been a bit of as crier, and I do find I cry more now, in private, but I am very lonely and I was never meant to be this lonely. I'm content enough, not depressed...like you say it is human nature.
I enjoyed reading this today and it made me think...and that could be really dangerous LOL
Dinah
reply by the author on 05-May-2012
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This is really an excellent piece on 'human nature'. I now myself I have always been a bit of as crier, and I do find I cry more now, in private, but I am very lonely and I was never meant to be this lonely. I'm content enough, not depressed...like you say it is human nature.
I enjoyed reading this today and it made me think...and that could be really dangerous LOL
Dinah
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 05-May-2012
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Dinah, I am so pleased you liked this one, but I was so sad to find you are so lonely. I agree with you, you were not meant to be lonely, I can tell that in your writing. You are such a warm hearted lady, and although we probably will never meet, I feel I know you enough to call you my friend. There is nothing wrong with crying, it is a way of healing. Take care, Sandra xsx
Comment from skye
The triple rhyming lines make this one effective, easy to read, and the message is important.
Humans have emotions, and they are generally universal. The ones you have used are typical, the questions are thoughtful.
Well done.
reply by the author on 05-May-2012
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The triple rhyming lines make this one effective, easy to read, and the message is important.
Humans have emotions, and they are generally universal. The ones you have used are typical, the questions are thoughtful.
Well done.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 05-May-2012
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Thank you Skye for this lovely review, I am pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you. xsx
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This well-written poem is very encouraging. Sometimes I'm having a little pity party; then I look at all my blessings, have a little guilt party, and move on. Very good!
reply by the author on 05-May-2012
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This well-written poem is very encouraging. Sometimes I'm having a little pity party; then I look at all my blessings, have a little guilt party, and move on. Very good!
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 05-May-2012
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I love your review, Janice, the idea of a 'pity party,' sounds like a good idea! Invite all the friends round and have a hum dinger of one, it will soon put things to right!! I think we should all have one of those!! Thank you for this lovely review! xsx
Comment from justjo66
This is quite the encouraging poem with an
uplifting rhythmn and flow. Very effective.
I liked it very much. The rhymes flow
naturally and make the poem more enjoyable.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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This is quite the encouraging poem with an
uplifting rhythmn and flow. Very effective.
I liked it very much. The rhymes flow
naturally and make the poem more enjoyable.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you so much for this really lovely review, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you! xsx
Comment from Starlit Ink
This is short and simple but speaks so much, conveying that it is ok to be human. Those feelings are usually inflicted on us by others, and it's a mystery, so why ask why? Well said.
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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This is short and simple but speaks so much, conveying that it is ok to be human. Those feelings are usually inflicted on us by others, and it's a mystery, so why ask why? Well said.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you, I am really pleased you understood my poem, thank you for this lovely review. xsx
Comment from tinams
This is a terrific poem Sandra. Just my kind of no nonsense straight talking stanzas that I an relate to and understand. Very well written :) Tina
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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This is a terrific poem Sandra. Just my kind of no nonsense straight talking stanzas that I an relate to and understand. Very well written :) Tina
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 04-May-2012
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Thank you, Tina, so very much for this lovely review and the lovely 6 stars!! I am just so pleased you enjoyed it, thank you! xsx