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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "My spectacular crash"
The author tells a tale how he tried to better him

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Comment from Misrael
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That was short and to the point and I really do sympathize with you. I have always been a clumsy person and would be doing push ups all my life if I were in the Military.

 Comment Written 02-May-2012


reply by the author on 02-May-2012
    thanks for your review
Comment from barkingdog
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What a great story. How humiliating ... in front of everyone. You must have been all legs as a kid and excited lost your footing. Awkward youth is noted for its comical falls, stepping on girls' toes while dancing, etc.

I do enjoy your stories.

 Comment Written 02-May-2012


reply by the author on 02-May-2012
    Thank you barking dog.
Comment from inkedone
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I love to read your writing. It's so honest and to the point. It really doesn't matter that there are grammatical errors and punctuauions are out of place. You write from experience. That's the best kind.

 Comment Written 02-May-2012


reply by the author on 02-May-2012
    Thanks. I'm working on those grammatical errors. I hope there weren't to many.