Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Petals on the wind"A collection of poetry.
4 total reviews
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
You're establishing, with me at least, (I know. You're like, totally thrilled, right? ;0) ), that you're a bona fide master of the 'Awwwww!' poem. :0)
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You're establishing, with me at least, (I know. You're like, totally thrilled, right? ;0) ), that you're a bona fide master of the 'Awwwww!' poem. :0)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from LWLewis
I think this is one of the better poems that I have read on this net. The words are simple, the message very clear, and the poem follows a logical progression.
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I think this is one of the better poems that I have read on this net. The words are simple, the message very clear, and the poem follows a logical progression.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2005
Comment from Mrs Jones
Love is like a flower,
In a field of dreams.
For each breath of wind,
A petal falls, it seems.
Lovely words and this could be a very good verse.
A bit short and the meter is out.
Good work
Rose
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Love is like a flower,
In a field of dreams.
For each breath of wind,
A petal falls, it seems.
Lovely words and this could be a very good verse.
A bit short and the meter is out.
Good work
Rose
Comment Written 15-Feb-2005
Comment from Balladeer
Very nice poem. The meter and flow was pleasurable to this reader. I like your message and the visualization were very clear. Great Job. Good writing
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Very nice poem. The meter and flow was pleasurable to this reader. I like your message and the visualization were very clear. Great Job. Good writing
Comment Written 15-Feb-2005