Unstoppable
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Comment from al1801
Love the idea v- new beginnings, indeed there are, every day and that, is life. Good artwork - and I'm a fan for the white on black colour scheme.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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Love the idea v- new beginnings, indeed there are, every day and that, is life. Good artwork - and I'm a fan for the white on black colour scheme.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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thank you
Comment from Glasstruth
The cycle forever turns as you wrote: "All ending New beginnings" Like the title, "Unstoppable" suggests that time's running with its ups and downs. A great, little shortie! Les
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The cycle forever turns as you wrote: "All ending New beginnings" Like the title, "Unstoppable" suggests that time's running with its ups and downs. A great, little shortie! Les
Comment Written 30-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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thanks
Comment from amarherig14
Life is unpredictable, today you may be poor and miserable and tomorrow your life may change for the better. Nobody knows what tomorrow may bring.A short poem saying a lot.
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Life is unpredictable, today you may be poor and miserable and tomorrow your life may change for the better. Nobody knows what tomorrow may bring.A short poem saying a lot.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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thank you
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You are welcome,keimosobie. Regards,amarherig.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise poem very well describes the outlook of those who tend to see the sweet side of life; they see endings as beginnings. Really good
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Your concise poem very well describes the outlook of those who tend to see the sweet side of life; they see endings as beginnings. Really good
Comment Written 30-Apr-2012
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thanks
Comment from ennahanid
I like very much this little 'shortie' from your quill.
This once again gives the definite thought that quality far outshines quantity...and you would think I would actually get that message by now...Thanks so much - I enjpyed'
Dinah
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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I like very much this little 'shortie' from your quill.
This once again gives the definite thought that quality far outshines quantity...and you would think I would actually get that message by now...Thanks so much - I enjpyed'
Dinah
Comment Written 28-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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Thank you
Comment from Capricorn30
Oh,ain't that the truth--for every ending,there is a new beginning--this is a saying that will never grow old. A cute little display, for a cute little write.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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Oh,ain't that the truth--for every ending,there is a new beginning--this is a saying that will never grow old. A cute little display, for a cute little write.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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thank you for the knid review
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Since you have corrected the error, I will add the fifth star. This poem is good enough for five, in my opinion. Keep writing! Just be more careful in proofreading. :)
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new beingings << NO excuse for a typo in such a small, short poem. Proofread every word before posting.
We know what you meant to say, but your carelessness spoiled an otherwise insightful, encouraging poem. You let the reader down, here, frankly. Please be more careful in the future. :(
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2012
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Since you have corrected the error, I will add the fifth star. This poem is good enough for five, in my opinion. Keep writing! Just be more careful in proofreading. :)
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new beingings << NO excuse for a typo in such a small, short poem. Proofread every word before posting.
We know what you meant to say, but your carelessness spoiled an otherwise insightful, encouraging poem. You let the reader down, here, frankly. Please be more careful in the future. :(
Comment Written 27-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2012
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take it easy that my 15 y/o daughter who wrote this I think.
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Age is not relevant... 15 is old enough to avoid carelessness. Besides, how am I to know a teen wrote a post??? Put it in the author notes if you want folks to know.
Now that it has been edited and corrected, it has earned another star, for it was well conceived. :)
