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The author tells a tale how he tried to better him
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Comment from
ulster3
Hello,keimosobie.
The last chapter I read had a note saying it was true. This chapter is listed under fiction. Is each chapter different in that regard?
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 24-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2012
Comment from
lyssa777
this was a good story. I was kept interested by your choice of wording. You dialogue was believable,and your descriptive words kept me interested.I enjoyed the part the main part of the story how you met your wife. I to believe that people are placed in your life for reasons as good or bad. I also feel you could of made your ending a little different to keep the story going good job
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
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Comment from
TammyGail
Wow..Sounds like you really had a hard time
back than getting back and forth to work
I'm sure that was hell hitch hiking and than
all the shit heads stealing all the time
and loved hearing how you meet your wife
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
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