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The sinking of a Hospital Ship in 1943.

33 total reviews 
Comment from jlsavell
Exceptional
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Hello sweet Aussie. I am back for just a few minutes today. Once again, your delivery is exceptional. You take history and make it come alive with your exceptional work. You go girl!!! jimi

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
    G'day Jimi, Thanks so much for dropping in, glad you liked the poem. Blessings Mrs. Pickle.
Comment from Darla9
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Very dynamic, powerful piece! Can't believe he only got four years in jail! That's absolutely disgusting. Thank you for sharing this interesting piece of work.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2012
    Thank you Darla9 for reading and reviewing. Cheers, K.
Comment from tinams
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This is an amazing true story, Aussie. Your poem tells the events of this despicable deed very well. I can't believe his punishment was only 4 years. Very powerful and informative poem. :) Tina


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2012
    Tina, Thanks so much for reading - no, a slap on the wrist for killing all those innocents was so wrong. Cheers, K.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Four years! What a farce unless he was ordered by his superiors, then as a soldier he had to comply.You have a very dynamic picture here and the story is chilling to say the least. Thanks for sharing. Honeycomb.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2012
    Thank you Honeycomb, apparently he had seen the ship and knew it was a Hospital ship, made no difference. Cheers, K.
Comment from RebelRose
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That UBoat captain literally got away with murder. That's the way it looks to me. A sad story told in this well written poem. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2012
    Thank you my friend; murder is the word for it - innocents lost their lives under the protection of the Geneva convention. Cheers, Kace.
Comment from Gungalo
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Sigh such a sad time when the one went down. I can't even begin to imagine it. A wonderful wonderful story. Good job Aussie and a beautiful write.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2012
    Tanka you so much for da reading; lots of atrocities during the war. Bless you sigh, Kace.
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent acrostic form and you give a voice to those who died on this ship. My father served three years of combat in WWII so I enjoy all poetry about this era.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2012
    mermaids, Thanks so much for reading - At the going down of the sun and in the morning, we will remember them. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from IndianaIrish
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Wow...what an amazing true story this is, Aussie. Your poem tells the tell of the horror very well. Very powerful poem.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2012
    Hi Indy, Thanks so much for reading, dreadful loss of lives. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from ameen786
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Aussie my friend, in so few lines you captured a significant part of history that reflect mankind's recklessness at the height of war; great rhyme and rhythm and I agree the sentence should have been death.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2012
    ameen 786 - Thanks so much for reading, we can't begin to imagine the atrocities of war unless we were there. Blessings, Kace.
Comment from mumsyone
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A very nice acrostic, and very informative. I hadn't heard of this incident, so it was very interesting to me. Great artwork, too.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2012
    G'day mumsyone, Thanks so much for reading, so many atrocities that we can't begin to imagine. Blessings, Kace.