Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Grace King
Jewell,
Send all the memories into obscurity and begin a new life filled with new memories.
Great work relating the mixed feelings you deal with in a divorce and letting go to begin anew.
Well written
all my best
flo
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Jewell,
Send all the memories into obscurity and begin a new life filled with new memories.
Great work relating the mixed feelings you deal with in a divorce and letting go to begin anew.
Well written
all my best
flo
Comment Written 10-Feb-2005
Comment from Gremlinsmom
This is a great poem. I loved the whole thing. I think this may be a new favorite from you...Great writing. I could see this one. I was inside your poem. Good one!
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This is a great poem. I loved the whole thing. I think this may be a new favorite from you...Great writing. I could see this one. I was inside your poem. Good one!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2005
Comment from Lestina
Hello Jewell!
I think your shout became more than this:
until my shout became a song in the dawn of a brand new day.
your shout also became a poem! Wonderful Writing Jewell! A
very creative way to celebrate your divorce I must say. Be Blessed Jewell!
Fantastic Poem and Writing. Thanks for sharing!
Lestina
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Hello Jewell!
I think your shout became more than this:
until my shout became a song in the dawn of a brand new day.
your shout also became a poem! Wonderful Writing Jewell! A
very creative way to celebrate your divorce I must say. Be Blessed Jewell!
Fantastic Poem and Writing. Thanks for sharing!
Lestina
Comment Written 09-Feb-2005
Comment from Jaxson Phoenix
Well done my friend. The only way to truly move on is to forgive and forget the pain of the past and your symbolic gesture will help you do just that. I look for great things to come from you. Keep the faith.
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Well done my friend. The only way to truly move on is to forgive and forget the pain of the past and your symbolic gesture will help you do just that. I look for great things to come from you. Keep the faith.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2005
Comment from Walter L. Jones
Age takes the will and adds the color of life into words left for the breeze to carry away, poets take all and give freely to the world, releasing to the world in bright wrapped packages...Walt
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Age takes the will and adds the color of life into words left for the breeze to carry away, poets take all and give freely to the world, releasing to the world in bright wrapped packages...Walt
Comment Written 09-Feb-2005
Comment from #1GRANDMA
Never thought of using balloons. I did however write things like you but then tore them & watched them burn. In my mind I saw it was now over & time to move on. I like you style of writing, & most of the time I can really relate to it. But unlike you I can not write poetry
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Never thought of using balloons. I did however write things like you but then tore them & watched them burn. In my mind I saw it was now over & time to move on. I like you style of writing, & most of the time I can really relate to it. But unlike you I can not write poetry
Comment Written 09-Feb-2005
Comment from made2soar
A wonderful title for this starting over lullaby you have sharing from your heart. You deserve a new dawn along with answered prayers and fulfilled promises. This melody flowing so smoothly as do all your sharings, and making their points so powerfully. Jim
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A wonderful title for this starting over lullaby you have sharing from your heart. You deserve a new dawn along with answered prayers and fulfilled promises. This melody flowing so smoothly as do all your sharings, and making their points so powerfully. Jim
Comment Written 08-Feb-2005
Comment from Sentra
Final closure can be made in so many different ways. Yet the closure you chose stands out to me as being a unique and individual display to a final chapter. I'm sure the pain, or should I say the emotional exhaustion sorta remains, but there must also be a breath of fresh air around you. Stand tall and reach for the sky, one never knows what might await.
You go girl! ~winks~
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Final closure can be made in so many different ways. Yet the closure you chose stands out to me as being a unique and individual display to a final chapter. I'm sure the pain, or should I say the emotional exhaustion sorta remains, but there must also be a breath of fresh air around you. Stand tall and reach for the sky, one never knows what might await.
You go girl! ~winks~
Comment Written 08-Feb-2005
Comment from Graceheart
What a wonderful read about how your life is changing! It is moving and touching and show the positive direction of your life and love! Tenderness is sewn through and through, with silky wording and free flow that shares so much of you with the reader! Outstanding in every way and speaks to the souls of your readers and lets them know how strong your heart really is! Bravo Jj!!! I really loved it!!!
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What a wonderful read about how your life is changing! It is moving and touching and show the positive direction of your life and love! Tenderness is sewn through and through, with silky wording and free flow that shares so much of you with the reader! Outstanding in every way and speaks to the souls of your readers and lets them know how strong your heart really is! Bravo Jj!!! I really loved it!!!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2005
Comment from El Romantico
That is a great idea with the balloons. Maybe that is something that I will have to try so that certain things in my life can be set free and no longer will I have to remember them. Thanks for the read and the idea.
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That is a great idea with the balloons. Maybe that is something that I will have to try so that certain things in my life can be set free and no longer will I have to remember them. Thanks for the read and the idea.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2005