Comment from Rob Caudle

Excellent

Very good work here sorry I did not find it earlier great use of the 5-7-5 loved the use of ayre although I had to look it up well done.

Rob

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 01-May-2012

thanks so much (:

Comment from Geetar

Excellent

Great little 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest. I love the seasons too, can't live without snow. I enjoyed reading this. You should include a definition of 'ayre' in the Author's notes for those who are not sure what it is.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2012

Thanks the feedback means so much !

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi angelicasolarvaldez! This is a lovely 5 7 5 poem. Your syllables are perfect. I love the first line about tangled hair. I love those sunflowers too :) Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012

Thanks so much!

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Summer tangled hair, <<< nice metaphor here!
Sunshine defining my ayre, <<< I had to look up the word ayre... perhaps it's common where you live, but not in USA
Savor seasons' flare. <<< good ending

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012

Thanks so much for the feedback. It's much appreciated.