Palanquin Bearers
An acrostic in nonet form.6 total reviews
Comment from amarherig14
Well written Acrostic in Nonet form. The picture used is a plus to your write. It has a good lesson within it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Well written Acrostic in Nonet form. The picture used is a plus to your write. It has a good lesson within it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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One thing I must discover about these competitions is how to get hold of the results. I don't know how well or how badly I did. Thanks for your five stars.
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On the main page on top says contests, click on it.A small page will show to see voting booth, click on it. You can vote for some writing you liked,not for yourself.There you can see how you did,
Comment from dportwood
Phillip Catshill,
Nice job of combining the two poetic styles. Syllabics are perfectly done. Good luck in your contest. You have a worthy piece.
Duane
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Phillip Catshill,
Nice job of combining the two poetic styles. Syllabics are perfectly done. Good luck in your contest. You have a worthy piece.
Duane
Comment Written 24-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Thank you. I never found the results of the competition so I have to assume I didn't win! Thanks for your five stars!
Comment from uniqueauthor
I like the poem. They was a tiem when the nobles were so lazy this was only way they traveled. It was a lot like those who sat beineath a shade and had slaves fanning them with long Palm fronds. This is a well penned verse, and the picture, while appropriate, was not necessary.
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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I like the poem. They was a tiem when the nobles were so lazy this was only way they traveled. It was a lot like those who sat beineath a shade and had slaves fanning them with long Palm fronds. This is a well penned verse, and the picture, while appropriate, was not necessary.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Many thanks for the excellent five stars!
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You're welcome. Peace for today.
Comment from ennahanid
A Nonet and an Acrostic, very, very clever. My fingers are plumb tuckered out syllable counting for these Nonets but happy to say yours was the perfect count...at least on my fingers LOL
Love the word you chose...unusual...and interesting
Your choice of art complements your words beautifully, making this a picture perfect presentation.
It was a real pleasure to read you today
Thank you
Dinah
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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A Nonet and an Acrostic, very, very clever. My fingers are plumb tuckered out syllable counting for these Nonets but happy to say yours was the perfect count...at least on my fingers LOL
Love the word you chose...unusual...and interesting
Your choice of art complements your words beautifully, making this a picture perfect presentation.
It was a real pleasure to read you today
Thank you
Dinah
Comment Written 26-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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A nonet to Dinah
I know how difficult it can be
You have to be numerate see
Just to count from one to nine
Take one from evā??ry line
Try to make a rhyme
Works evā??ry time
Great! Dinah
Five Star
Thanks!
Comment from Carrie Carson
I like this learning the term for the bearers of the coaches. I think I tried one of these combinations, too. It's fun to play with them.
Didn't see any spag (spelling and grammar) issues.
Thanks for a good read. Welcome to the site!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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I like this learning the term for the bearers of the coaches. I think I tried one of these combinations, too. It's fun to play with them.
Didn't see any spag (spelling and grammar) issues.
Thanks for a good read. Welcome to the site!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2012
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A nonet reply for Carrie Carson
Hey Carrie Carson Iā??ve heard of SPAG
I have had it with bolognaise!
Your five stars give cause to brag,
They came with so much praise,
I hope you like this,
A nonet ode
Is my code
To say
THANKS!
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Quite the thank you, thank you. When someone said spag to me, I had to ask what that was. Take it easy.
Comment from JW
Your poem is very well written and it does a great job of describing the requirement needed for one to be a Palanquin bearers for a Noble, King, or Lord.
It's definitely not a job I think I would be interested in.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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Your poem is very well written and it does a great job of describing the requirement needed for one to be a Palanquin bearers for a Noble, King, or Lord.
It's definitely not a job I think I would be interested in.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 26-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 09-May-2012
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I think this must be the longest delay in replying to a review on record. I'm sorry I haven't composed a poem in reply which has been my custom. Thank you for your five stars, Jonathon
