Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hey Jewell, I am so not getting announcements of your writings and I'm a fan...wonder why? This is a fab piece of writing. I liked the rhyming scheme. It feels like you are holding a conversation with me freestyle with just enough rhyme to make the piece glide softly into my mind. Wonderful work my friend. xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Hey Jewell, I am so not getting announcements of your writings and I'm a fan...wonder why? This is a fab piece of writing. I liked the rhyming scheme. It feels like you are holding a conversation with me freestyle with just enough rhyme to make the piece glide softly into my mind. Wonderful work my friend. xoxo deborah
Comment Written 04-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012
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Hmmm, not sure but my postings have been far and few between. ;)
Comment from Diny
This is so much more worth a seven! Your spirit and wonderful support comes shining through the mention in the notes is presious as are you. YOUprobably know me better than most of my frienshere close. BUT then again there is a goodness beyond thephysical. Love Y's,Di
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2012
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This is so much more worth a seven! Your spirit and wonderful support comes shining through the mention in the notes is presious as are you. YOUprobably know me better than most of my frienshere close. BUT then again there is a goodness beyond thephysical. Love Y's,Di
Comment Written 22-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2012
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Aaaw. Love ya, girl. You actually inspired this years ago when you asked, " What is it you see?" I re-titled it and posted it again. Wrote some good stuff back then. ;-) Seems to come in streams...
Miss your poems, girl!
Thanks so much for your constant support.
Comment from bard owl
The last verse of this poem is pure inspiration. If only everyone could think of adversity as fire that purifies and refines us. Lovely words presented in a flawless rhythm and rhyme. A sixer for sure. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2012
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The last verse of this poem is pure inspiration. If only everyone could think of adversity as fire that purifies and refines us. Lovely words presented in a flawless rhythm and rhyme. A sixer for sure. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 22-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2012
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Thank you Linda! You're amazing...
Comment from patsypats
Well written and good use of descriptive words to display vivid imagery. Your picture choice accents your work and your rhyming scheme adds a bit of character to your words:)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2012
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Well written and good use of descriptive words to display vivid imagery. Your picture choice accents your work and your rhyming scheme adds a bit of character to your words:)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2012
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Graceheart
This is so perfect for the feelings I have had since I found out about my wife. You are truely gifted from our FATHER in Heaven to be able to feel others pain and joy and pen it perfectly. On top of all of that the closing line said it all...we have pain for one of 2 reasons; 1) Self inflicted, discipline for sins because they are unconfessed and we are out of Fellowship with GOD the HOLY SPIRIT and 2)We have confessed them, they were put back on the Cross, we are in Fellowship, filled with the HOLY SPIRIT and we are being tested for Blessing from GOD..."The joy of pain becomes refining when combined with Love and Light" thought about and penned perfectly! You are Awesome Lady!!! Thank you for your understanding, and thank GOD Grace for giving it to you!!!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2012
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This is so perfect for the feelings I have had since I found out about my wife. You are truely gifted from our FATHER in Heaven to be able to feel others pain and joy and pen it perfectly. On top of all of that the closing line said it all...we have pain for one of 2 reasons; 1) Self inflicted, discipline for sins because they are unconfessed and we are out of Fellowship with GOD the HOLY SPIRIT and 2)We have confessed them, they were put back on the Cross, we are in Fellowship, filled with the HOLY SPIRIT and we are being tested for Blessing from GOD..."The joy of pain becomes refining when combined with Love and Light" thought about and penned perfectly! You are Awesome Lady!!! Thank you for your understanding, and thank GOD Grace for giving it to you!!!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2012
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Thanks. You are in His hands. Better yet, in His arms...
Thanks so much for stopping in and responding. God bless!
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello Jewell
Sweet-cakes, it is damn hard to squeeze a sixth star outta me, but it was easy with this magnificently crafted and written poem. Its meaning and feel are dully noted by this reviewer. You really are top drawer my love
Bear
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2012
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Hello Jewell
Sweet-cakes, it is damn hard to squeeze a sixth star outta me, but it was easy with this magnificently crafted and written poem. Its meaning and feel are dully noted by this reviewer. You really are top drawer my love
Bear
Comment Written 22-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2012
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Wow Bear...I'm speechless
Thank you!
Comment from Jean Lutz
Here's hoping that your words will light a flame that burns brightly all around the globe. Too much darkness -- maybe because more don't see what you see.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Here's hoping that your words will light a flame that burns brightly all around the globe. Too much darkness -- maybe because more don't see what you see.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Thanks my dear sister! Precious words, here. Thank you!
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Thanks my dear sister! Precious words, here. Thank you!
Comment from words
Well done write on the refiner's fire.
Love your metaphysical ponder.
I especially like:I feel refining fire's flame
Creating gilded treasures fine
Where broken vessels become whole
Reflections of a truth sublime
Intrigued by those who know the fire
I've come to revel in delight
The joy of pain becomes refining
When combined with love and light
Bravo!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Well done write on the refiner's fire.
Love your metaphysical ponder.
I especially like:I feel refining fire's flame
Creating gilded treasures fine
Where broken vessels become whole
Reflections of a truth sublime
Intrigued by those who know the fire
I've come to revel in delight
The joy of pain becomes refining
When combined with love and light
Bravo!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Anisa-
I really thought you did an excellent job with this poem. The descriptions were great, and it seemed to flow very well.
I got a little hung up in the second to last verse, last two lines. It could have just been me, but it seemed to stop the flow momentarily for me.
Anyways, fantastic job. It was an enjoyable read.
Anisa
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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I really thought you did an excellent job with this poem. The descriptions were great, and it seemed to flow very well.
I got a little hung up in the second to last verse, last two lines. It could have just been me, but it seemed to stop the flow momentarily for me.
Anyways, fantastic job. It was an enjoyable read.
Anisa
Comment Written 21-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Probably just your interpretation... I'll take a look though.
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of abcb rhyming
I love the image of the pen dipped in golden honeyed truth
lovely alliteration in draws from deeper wells
and pool of pain
This is meaningful and lovely, Jewell :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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excellent use of abcb rhyming
I love the image of the pen dipped in golden honeyed truth
lovely alliteration in draws from deeper wells
and pool of pain
This is meaningful and lovely, Jewell :-) Brooke
Comment Written 21-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Thank you very much, Brooke!