The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Two Days of Hell"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from RebelRose
Obviously Romani and Romanian are two different lauguages??? I have heard of Romanian. Boy, those poor children taken to be wives and having to give birth when they were mere children themselves. So sad. This is a really good chapter. A lot of info in this one.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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Obviously Romani and Romanian are two different lauguages??? I have heard of Romanian. Boy, those poor children taken to be wives and having to give birth when they were mere children themselves. So sad. This is a really good chapter. A lot of info in this one.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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A ton of research too. My head is spinning. I am researching Washington State Law now....BOOOOORING!
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Hello,
Wow!
What an interesting and exciting chapter.
Sorry, I haven't been reviewing very much. I've been busy working.
This chapter is great. Wow, what a sick man eh?
Good descriptions.
Good dialogue.
Great way to end it too.
Katie
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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Hello,
Wow!
What an interesting and exciting chapter.
Sorry, I haven't been reviewing very much. I've been busy working.
This chapter is great. Wow, what a sick man eh?
Good descriptions.
Good dialogue.
Great way to end it too.
Katie
Comment Written 14-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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Thanks. I am thrilled you liked this one. Don't worry about not reviewing much...I've been really busy too.
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You're welcome.
:)
Katie
Comment from psalmist
Unfortunately, I know this sort of sickness exists in the world, but it is still horrible to contemplate what a terrible life James' father had. Although there is much intrigue and hidden secrets in the story, I like that you have given James an open and honest persona, one of integrity and honor. Quite a contrast to his father. Well done. Linda
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Unfortunately, I know this sort of sickness exists in the world, but it is still horrible to contemplate what a terrible life James' father had. Although there is much intrigue and hidden secrets in the story, I like that you have given James an open and honest persona, one of integrity and honor. Quite a contrast to his father. Well done. Linda
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2012
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Thanks. You are right, too much of this does exist in the world.
Comment from Alaskastory
Both chapters 27 and 28 that tell about James translations of his grandfather's journal are written in a clear and intriguing way.
you for your: 'James, you(r) father is scheduled to appear..
Well done chapters, Sasha.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Both chapters 27 and 28 that tell about James translations of his grandfather's journal are written in a clear and intriguing way.
you for your: 'James, you(r) father is scheduled to appear..
Well done chapters, Sasha.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thanks for catching the spag. I took the day off and won't be posting another chapter until tomorrow.
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Smurphy
The horror continues.
It's quite unsettling looking into the mad of a madman. All those woman and children his evil has touched.
The tension is really coming to a boil.
Ron
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Hi Smurphy
The horror continues.
It's quite unsettling looking into the mad of a madman. All those woman and children his evil has touched.
The tension is really coming to a boil.
Ron
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thanks. Yes, things are getting pretty wild.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a horror story - a madman
with his different wives and babies..
he must have been insane.
I had no need [for](of) a girl.
I name(d) him
I wasn't happy Dad might get the death penalty[,](;) I was thrilled
Margaret
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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What a horror story - a madman
with his different wives and babies..
he must have been insane.
I had no need [for](of) a girl.
I name(d) him
I wasn't happy Dad might get the death penalty[,](;) I was thrilled
Margaret
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thanks for catching the spags. Yes, he certainly gives a whole new meaning to madman.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Smurph,
I am so glad you are posting a chapter in this book everyday. That means I don't have to wait too long for more answers. It seems since the dad murdered Marie Anne he can be charged with murder and get a sentence of death. Why would he want James to speak at his sentencing?. Surely he must know what James thinks of him. I'm waiting for the next chapter....blessings, chey *****
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Hi Smurph,
I am so glad you are posting a chapter in this book everyday. That means I don't have to wait too long for more answers. It seems since the dad murdered Marie Anne he can be charged with murder and get a sentence of death. Why would he want James to speak at his sentencing?. Surely he must know what James thinks of him. I'm waiting for the next chapter....blessings, chey *****
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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I hope to post another chapter today but I have a doctor's appointment and may have to wait until tomorrow....sorry.
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Sob! Hope your doctor visit goes well and I can wait for the next chapter even if I don't want to!
Comment from Showboat
Hi Sasha, hope you had a gorgeous weekend. I bet you spent it at the beach!
It is amazing how mental illness and instability often run in families. Over the last year or two, I've been doing research on a variety of disorders and the incidence of a child with ABD, for instance, as often as not has a parent or sibling with the same or similar disorder. It's in the genes, I guess.
Great job,
Hugs,
Gayle
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Hi Sasha, hope you had a gorgeous weekend. I bet you spent it at the beach!
It is amazing how mental illness and instability often run in families. Over the last year or two, I've been doing research on a variety of disorders and the incidence of a child with ABD, for instance, as often as not has a parent or sibling with the same or similar disorder. It's in the genes, I guess.
Great job,
Hugs,
Gayle
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Yes, I spent it at the beach. Certain forms of mental illness have definitely been proven to be genetic. But many do not. It still boils down to environment and lifestyle for many.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oncea again you have written a wonderful chapter, full of emotion and description. It is very interesting to read and keeps the readers attention throughout.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Oncea again you have written a wonderful chapter, full of emotion and description. It is very interesting to read and keeps the readers attention throughout.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Thanks. I am about ready for my own breakdown. Can't wait until this is finished!
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Valerie:)
No wonder James' father was twisted mentally. It's obvious that he was terribly abused by his father. I wonder how much of his ancestry he knew. Do you plan to reveal when John changed his family name to Mathews.
The speculation that James' grandfather could still be alive is an incredible twist. How many more wives....?
James is certainly seeking to do what he can for all the victims and their families. I wonder how Dad wil react when he finds out that some of his crim are no longer secrets.
The real mystery now is who delivered the diary to john Mathews.
I noted what I believe is a small error:1. The answer James was looking for was not in the journal. isn't James narrating what is in the diary?
this story continues to grow more intense with each post. I can't wait to see it published and made into a blockbuster movie, as I am convinced it will be.
Love and Iris hugs to give you more strength to finish.
Roger
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Hi Valerie:)
No wonder James' father was twisted mentally. It's obvious that he was terribly abused by his father. I wonder how much of his ancestry he knew. Do you plan to reveal when John changed his family name to Mathews.
The speculation that James' grandfather could still be alive is an incredible twist. How many more wives....?
James is certainly seeking to do what he can for all the victims and their families. I wonder how Dad wil react when he finds out that some of his crim are no longer secrets.
The real mystery now is who delivered the diary to john Mathews.
I noted what I believe is a small error:1. The answer James was looking for was not in the journal. isn't James narrating what is in the diary?
this story continues to grow more intense with each post. I can't wait to see it published and made into a blockbuster movie, as I am convinced it will be.
Love and Iris hugs to give you more strength to finish.
Roger
Comment Written 12-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2012
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Yes there are plenty of twists in this story. I do plan to tell when and how James's father changed his name to Mathews. Thanks for catching the change in POV. I'll go back and fix that.