Comment from Sueellen11

Good

Nicely written good flow , love to see the leaves floating in the wind, and big fluffy white fooling alone above, yes sure makes one feel alive, blessings sueellen

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013

thnk youuuuu....thnks a lottt

Comment from African Prophet

Excellent

Yep, love it. but the numbering seems a little odd though. could be wrong, but is there more than 5 syllables in the first line? anyhow, great stuff. makes for feel for the outdoors man.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-May-2013

Thank you........its just that these words suit the best.....
The syllables maybe wrong but back then when i wrote it i thought it was right....
I could be wrong too,ofcourse..
But thanks a billion for the review!!

Comment from Fluffyhead

Excellent

You did a good job for you and with such a small poem. Small poems are something I am not so good at. Hope you write more stuff.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013

thanks a lot................

Comment from Ms57Classic

Exceptional

The words you used made it easy to visualize what you were trying to express. Of all the 5-7-5 poetry that I have read so far, this by far is the best one. Great job!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013

thanks a lot ma'am. it feels good to be said '''a best of d best''.....

Comment from seren james

Excellent

I have given you 5 stars as this is a good poem. But there are one too many syllables in line one and three. The contest is for 5-7-5 and yours is 6-7-6.If you can edit it it will be better.Keep writing.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012

Thank you so much for the suggestion.
But I thought it was a 5 and a 5,anyways I'll see to it, ma'am.
Glad you stopped by for reviewing.
Thanks a lot.
---Wanderer

Comment from CreativeWriter2012

Excellent

This is a very good haiku! I recently entered this contest with my haiku "Sky".
I love your Haiku because it expresses so much in so little space! I love how your poem conveys so much feeling in just 17 syllybals! Great job, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2012

THANKS A LOT!!
It does give a lot of support to beginners like me!

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Winter keeps most of us inside in an artificial atmosphere. Get up, go out, inhale and see all the wonders of our world.
Wake up your senses and your appetites. Great little gem of wisdom.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012

thank you.....
I am glad you enjoyed.

Comment from noland

Excellent

I like this; a 5-7-5 with an exhortation. It paints a vivid picture with only a few words, as well. I hope it does well in the contest. Enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2012

thanks for the response!