Comment from MAMONIA

Excellent

Oh yeah! This is really, really great!!
Who doesn't have this fantasy? You go girl!!
What a fabulous picture to complement your
words. I just loved it all.
Congrats! You certainly deserved this win.
Lots of love,
Marie

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2012

hehe thank you marie! :)

Comment from Lovinia

Excellent

Hi shelley kaye

Congratulations! I have to give it to you, this is a knock-out. You took me by surprise - "naked on the beach" - I only thought under the sea. A sensual and exciting expression of yes, very much, the "female fantasy" - I'm not sure about the squid though. lol Some oysters for sure before. Very clever. Very arousing and provocative. Great work.
Warmest regards - :) Lovinia xoxox

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012

LOL! thank you lovinia :)

Comment from jtaylor1969

Excellent

Very impressive. This poem was both erotic and somehow, complete in so few words. Well done. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more.
Yours,
JT

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

thank you jt :-)

Comment from patsolstad

Excellent

This is lovely. I am wondering, though, if it might not be better to write, in the second line, 'skin flushed body writhes in joy.' I'm just not certain that a body can 'writhe joy.' Very nice work.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

good point - changed it! thanx pat! :-)

Comment from randomzed

Excellent

I'm certain your fantasy lasts longer than that.
However, such are the limitations of the haiku.
These 5-7-5 are really only good for inciting discussion, or dialogue.
Well done, but I'm sure you could say more ....and I'd listen.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

lol! thank you random :-)