I Love
Expression of love72 total reviews
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
An expression of love, from afar it seems. Just the 'being in your orbit brings me joy' kind of love. This seems a nicely balanced type of love that brings happiness and warmth, a good feeling when reading. Good. 5-7-5 form. Great job.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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An expression of love, from afar it seems. Just the 'being in your orbit brings me joy' kind of love. This seems a nicely balanced type of love that brings happiness and warmth, a good feeling when reading. Good. 5-7-5 form. Great job.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks but why not a six star just curious
Comment from HPicasso
This is a very nice poem. Simply beautiful and very touching. I really enjoy the intensity of emotion of this poem. Well done with this little 5-7-5 piece. Your poem has a sincere tone in expressing love and appreciation. I love the message you have portrayed here. Thank you for reminding me of the power and intensity of love.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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This is a very nice poem. Simply beautiful and very touching. I really enjoy the intensity of emotion of this poem. Well done with this little 5-7-5 piece. Your poem has a sincere tone in expressing love and appreciation. I love the message you have portrayed here. Thank you for reminding me of the power and intensity of love.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much!why not the six star just curious
Comment from krazykats2011
I love the 5/7/5 poems. It is so amazing to me that such a powerful message can be incorporated within the three lines and syllable count allowed. You have hit the nail on the head with this one. I would not change a thing, other than maybe incorporating an image to solidify your thoughts.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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I love the 5/7/5 poems. It is so amazing to me that such a powerful message can be incorporated within the three lines and syllable count allowed. You have hit the nail on the head with this one. I would not change a thing, other than maybe incorporating an image to solidify your thoughts.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Ok thanks so much
Comment from HelioNova
This is a beautiful haiku. I always say anything that can appropriately portray emotion in only three lines is a masterpiece, aha! However, I feel like using punctuation could have made it flow better, e.g., Please come soon, my dear.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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This is a beautiful haiku. I always say anything that can appropriately portray emotion in only three lines is a masterpiece, aha! However, I feel like using punctuation could have made it flow better, e.g., Please come soon, my dear.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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ok and i think that is a very good advice thanks i change that.
Comment from TammyGail
Love from afar can be so very hard but if the two lovers have the love that is soul bound than anything can be.. This was simply divine really I loved it, I myself have a love afar long nights a cold bed are much at times but its worth it :) Wonderful work and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Love from afar can be so very hard but if the two lovers have the love that is soul bound than anything can be.. This was simply divine really I loved it, I myself have a love afar long nights a cold bed are much at times but its worth it :) Wonderful work and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much tell you fans and followers
Comment from Newsome
A beautiful and well written 5-7-5, my friend. Isn't it amazing what one can say in 17 syll's. Best of luck to you. I enjoyed your work!
Newsome
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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A beautiful and well written 5-7-5, my friend. Isn't it amazing what one can say in 17 syll's. Best of luck to you. I enjoyed your work!
Newsome
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks tell your fans and followers
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Thanks tell your fans and followers
Comment from c_lucas
Loving from afar is not a very satisfying contest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest. No errors.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Loving from afar is not a very satisfying contest. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest. No errors.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Bobbi22
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. Long distance love can be tough. But looking forward to and celebrating the return can be a great occasion.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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This is a great 5-7-5 poem. Long distance love can be tough. But looking forward to and celebrating the return can be a great occasion.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks and that is correct.
Comment from WilliamDeen
Your poem, I Love, expresses love from afar. Your poem has excellent syllable form of 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest. You might want to add a picture to go with your poem. That visual aid adds a lot to the overall look of the poem.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Your poem, I Love, expresses love from afar. Your poem has excellent syllable form of 5-7-5. Good luck in the contest. You might want to add a picture to go with your poem. That visual aid adds a lot to the overall look of the poem.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks for the advice
Comment from catch22
This is a very sweet and heartfelt 5-7-5 poem about yearning for someone who is far away. The syllable count is good and the form is correct. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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This is a very sweet and heartfelt 5-7-5 poem about yearning for someone who is far away. The syllable count is good and the form is correct. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
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Thanks and can you tell me why you didnt give me a six star just curious
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First, I don't have any left. Second, those are reserved for not just excellent poems, but poems that a reader really connects with (which is subjective, I know). These ratings are not easy to get, especially because every reviewer only has a limited # of six stars to give out by FS. Hope this helps you understand.
