Talking
Thoughts and such sorry if it is a bit rocky72 total reviews
Comment from gramalot8
K - I can so relate to this poem. I was very close to my dad and loved our special alone times together. This reminded me a lot of those occasions. Thanks for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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K - I can so relate to this poem. I was very close to my dad and loved our special alone times together. This reminded me a lot of those occasions. Thanks for sharing with us.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Yea me and my fathe are very close thanks for the kind reveiw
Comment from Glasstruth
The picture and color scheme is perfect. I can't place a face on the voice, but maybe it's better that way. I like the metaphor in "I can see the smile through the words" Really hypnotized by the voice in darkness. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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The picture and color scheme is perfect. I can't place a face on the voice, but maybe it's better that way. I like the metaphor in "I can see the smile through the words" Really hypnotized by the voice in darkness. Well done! Les
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you at first I was trying for a lighter picture but this popped in my head I couldn't get it out
Comment from The Stranger
I had to read it a few times but as I did, I began to unfold it, myunderstanding of it, or view if you like, is that of two close friends talking long distance, whilst inside, they are never far apart
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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I had to read it a few times but as I did, I began to unfold it, myunderstanding of it, or view if you like, is that of two close friends talking long distance, whilst inside, they are never far apart
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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You hit it dead on the nail he goes to a different school and it's hard to see him sometimes
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Kemo sabe. (I think that's how it's really spelled) Anyway, this is a fine poem you have offered up here. How are things on the Island? I grew up in the Northport...Huntington area as a teenager. Do you by chance work at the VA hospital? Anyway, this is excellent writing. I wish you well with it...(Lone Ranger) LOL.. Bob
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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Hi, Kemo sabe. (I think that's how it's really spelled) Anyway, this is a fine poem you have offered up here. How are things on the Island? I grew up in the Northport...Huntington area as a teenager. Do you by chance work at the VA hospital? Anyway, this is excellent writing. I wish you well with it...(Lone Ranger) LOL.. Bob
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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Thank tou
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okay Welcome.
Comment from cvcopac
I love the implied, the tone, the emotion, and I wondered who's voice? Father, husband/lover, God's? Sensual, vitreous, and mystifying poem.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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I love the implied, the tone, the emotion, and I wondered who's voice? Father, husband/lover, God's? Sensual, vitreous, and mystifying poem.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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It is one of my best friend always the voice of reason
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this si very well written, keimosobie, you did a great job writing this heartfelt and emotional free verse poem about the daughter that loved the sound of her father's voice.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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this si very well written, keimosobie, you did a great job writing this heartfelt and emotional free verse poem about the daughter that loved the sound of her father's voice.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Kay I wasn't really amining for that but I like the way you saw it to
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem is very good and I like the description of the voice of reason. We would have problems if we did not listen. The comfort felt from the voice we all know. Your poem has good structure and smooth line flow. Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Your poem is very good and I like the description of the voice of reason. We would have problems if we did not listen. The comfort felt from the voice we all know. Your poem has good structure and smooth line flow. Your photo compliments your poem well. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you I wasn't even thinking of doing anything dark themed but the photo captured me
Comment from oNray
Your thoughts provoke me into thoughts of such a person (some what) My grandfather was this voice of confidence,wisdom, comfort
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Your thoughts provoke me into thoughts of such a person (some what) My grandfather was this voice of confidence,wisdom, comfort
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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It is of my friend he is very close and I seem to take a lot of his wisdom and use it for my own :)
Comment from ameen786
Hello keimosobie, my friend a lovely, soothing and pleasing poem with simple yet meaningful words and superb phrasing,"My song of virtue, the voice of reason,"--just beautiful, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Hello keimosobie, my friend a lovely, soothing and pleasing poem with simple yet meaningful words and superb phrasing,"My song of virtue, the voice of reason,"--just beautiful, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Your welcome I do try to make my readers happy as does ever good writer
Comment from HPicasso
Your imagery is striking with your color scheme. Great illustration and presentation of your poem. you have such a talent for pulling at ones emotions. Very well crafted poem; I love the ending and your poem so smooth and elegant. The poem is inticing from begining to end, I love your use of words and the flow of the piece. I found your poem to be very delightful to read. I must say I have enjoyed it. It builds up well too with every verses building on the other.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Your imagery is striking with your color scheme. Great illustration and presentation of your poem. you have such a talent for pulling at ones emotions. Very well crafted poem; I love the ending and your poem so smooth and elegant. The poem is inticing from begining to end, I love your use of words and the flow of the piece. I found your poem to be very delightful to read. I must say I have enjoyed it. It builds up well too with every verses building on the other.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012
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Thank you I tried to put as much emotion I could thank you for the kind reveiw
