Talking
Thoughts and such sorry if it is a bit rocky72 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
She mentioned in her profile to be prepared to read your work as well. I enjoyed the honesty and serenity in your free verse. (I think the apostrophe in "It's" dropped off in the first line.) I also especially liked your use of the alliteration of "s's." -Joan
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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She mentioned in her profile to be prepared to read your work as well. I enjoyed the honesty and serenity in your free verse. (I think the apostrophe in "It's" dropped off in the first line.) I also especially liked your use of the alliteration of "s's." -Joan
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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thank you for the review joan I like using the alliterations its fun
Comment from nomi338
Great poem. One of my prized possessions is my deep bass voice. At the tender age of fourteen my voice changed suddenly and dramatically. Since that time I have had 'The Voice'. I am also a pretty good reader and people always tell me that I should be an on air personality, but I always defer. Your poem reminds me of these conversations and it makes me smile.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Great poem. One of my prized possessions is my deep bass voice. At the tender age of fourteen my voice changed suddenly and dramatically. Since that time I have had 'The Voice'. I am also a pretty good reader and people always tell me that I should be an on air personality, but I always defer. Your poem reminds me of these conversations and it makes me smile.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you but its ironic is voice is not very high pitched but high all the same
Comment from Lovinia
A creative and original poem. Beautiful presentation. A fascinating other world ring to your poem. Almost as though you are describing God. the poem can be read at a number levels and leaves much to ponder. Carefully selected phrasing and powerful ending . Well done. A pleasure to read.
Warm regards - :) Lovinia xoxo
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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A creative and original poem. Beautiful presentation. A fascinating other world ring to your poem. Almost as though you are describing God. the poem can be read at a number levels and leaves much to ponder. Carefully selected phrasing and powerful ending . Well done. A pleasure to read.
Warm regards - :) Lovinia xoxo
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you I write solely for the readers smile glad you liked it
Comment from angel123
I loved reading your poem. To me it is spiritual, meaningful, inspiring and enlightening. I especially love your last stanza.
I love this most
the voice calling in the darkness
My song of virtue
the voice of reason
Angel123
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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I loved reading your poem. To me it is spiritual, meaningful, inspiring and enlightening. I especially love your last stanza.
I love this most
the voice calling in the darkness
My song of virtue
the voice of reason
Angel123
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you for the kind review
Comment from Tengeresz
Hi
Men are always in search of reasons women are always in search of their feelings.This is not true in all cases but as a generalization it holds water. It is also the reason the genders feel as one.
Tengeresz
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Hi
Men are always in search of reasons women are always in search of their feelings.This is not true in all cases but as a generalization it holds water. It is also the reason the genders feel as one.
Tengeresz
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you for that bit of info
Comment from Kingsland
You did a very good job with the formatting of this piece. You have written a positive message with very good poetic verve. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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You did a very good job with the formatting of this piece. You have written a positive message with very good poetic verve. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you for the kind review
Comment from JennieClare
You've done a great job here describing what must be a wonderful voice and the fact that it takes you to another place. How lovely and soothing. Jennie
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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You've done a great job here describing what must be a wonderful voice and the fact that it takes you to another place. How lovely and soothing. Jennie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you for the kind review
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my pleasure. Jennie
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well you do have your fathers talent for writing! This is so well written, not rocky at all. I love the line,
Rocks me slow to sleep while he tells me a story...' That is so nice. I hope we hear more from you in the future! xsx
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Well you do have your fathers talent for writing! This is so well written, not rocky at all. I love the line,
Rocks me slow to sleep while he tells me a story...' That is so nice. I hope we hear more from you in the future! xsx
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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yes I look like him to seem to inheret his jeans
Comment from AprilShower
Good free verse, keimosobia. I can't help wonder who this voice is "the voice calling in the darkness My song of virtue the voice of reason. I enjoyed reading this. It reminded me of my childhood. I would be in bed and would listen to voices of adults talking.
April
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Good free verse, keimosobia. I can't help wonder who this voice is "the voice calling in the darkness My song of virtue the voice of reason. I enjoyed reading this. It reminded me of my childhood. I would be in bed and would listen to voices of adults talking.
April
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you for the kind review
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You're welcome, keimosobie.
Comment from Herb
Very nice. One of the best I've read today on this day of FS plenty. A nice poem that speaks of friendship and the love there. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Very nice. One of the best I've read today on this day of FS plenty. A nice poem that speaks of friendship and the love there. Good stuff.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you for the kind review
