Comment from Melspoems

Excellent

This is lovely, beautiful to imagine swinging from rainbows above the clouds, looking down on children swinging down below.
Nice rhymes in there too.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from purrfect tale

Excellent

I love the whimsical tone of this poem. There is the illusion of movement in every line that makes your words come alive. All the technical counts for the nonet are correct.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

First of all the artwork is beautiful and really enhances this excellent nonet.

The words flow freely and with the imagery, I can see you and the children having the time of your lives.

Again, an excellent piece of poetry so well done,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from axelbeariter

Excellent

I'm dreaming of swinging from rainbows

In clouds, toes not touching the ground

Catching petals in the breeze

Soaring with butterflies

High above the trees

Children swinging

Wild and free

Beneath

Me/This an excellent complement to the photo accompanying the words you write. Great word picture.


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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from rightforyou

Exceptional

Deb

I love the words and the message sent inside this wonderful poem...Purple adds to the wonderful photo that you have chosen ..Great job...Ron

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from Dr. Marsh

Excellent

I love the delicacy of the poem, and the imagery, as well. You chose an excellent piece of art and appropriate colors to go with this.

I think too the poem is very well-written, and the content made me smile. Good job.

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie