Comment from artemis53

Excellent

"I'm dreaming" is almost enough. The vivid artwork and colors are a wonder to behold. I also envision the catching of petals and soaring with butterflies. Today must've been beautiful.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is beautifully written and I enjoyed reading it. It is magical and entertaining and your artwork choice enhances your message.

Angel123

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review!!! Debbie

Comment from Amy Comstock

Excellent

Very vivid imagery! I want to swing on a rainbow, too!! How fun! I love poems that make me smile...yours did just that. Thank you.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Sounds like the ultiamate freedom doesn't it? Thank you so much for all of your kind reviews!!! Debbie

Comment from FlamingSpade

Excellent

Breathtaking. My heart thumped as it came up. Now I go back and will read it. Exquisite! I've missed you and your beautiful words. I've been awol entertaining with friends. I see why I missed FS! Ginger. Angelheart has my heart, too.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Angelheart is a wonderful artist and person too!!! Glad you enjoyed this fun little ditty~Debbie

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Debbie, Sounds like a really fun day. Love this poem. Just kind of flows along. Love the wording. And your picture is perfect. Enjoyed reading this. Linda hugs

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from Jotting Pen

Exceptional

Beautiful! Totally unforced and flows freely. This is a tricky form with the strict syllable count and you have produced a lovely, lilting verse which made me smile.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Glad I could make you smile!!! Debbie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the nonet, and I like your optional use of rhyme :-)
good alliteration in toes not touching and nice alliterative pairing of breeze and butterflies
What a delightful scene you create (I love swinging). Brooke

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thanks, Brooke! Doesn't it sound like fun??? Debbie

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Oh if only!! What fun. I used to swing all the time. Even as an adult. My son and I had a lot of fun...SO long ago. You really know how to do these Nonets! Beautiful work Debbie! Be well...hope to 'see' you soon! BEST with your procedure too! love, Susan

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thanks, Susan! Doesn't it sound like fun.? Hope your surgery went well. My procedure was awful as they didn't give me enough drugs to knock me out, and I spent yesterday vomiting again, so I am not sure it worked. I hate doctors. The one that did this was so arrogant!!! Take care. Love you, Debbie

reply by Realist101 on 02-Feb-2012

I am so sorry Deb. You just need a better clinic...do you have a choice??? PM me sometime...I send love and hugs my friend. xoxo. Susan

Comment from appuhere

Excellent

nice lines.... the thought of swinging from a rainbow is great..... i loved reading this nonet.............it brings in a calm and refreshing feeling.......... nice bit of work done...:)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie

Comment from Hosanna

Excellent

I absolutely love this!!! It is beautiful and I can imagine it all. I like the format you chose as well. It goes a long with your theme.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012

Thank you. Doesn't it sound like fun? Debbie