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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Lunch time i might even be a snack"
I am sick and tired of everyone bullying.

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Comment from Modee
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It's actually kind of funny watching other people in restaurants shoving food into their faces. Some take their time....others just shove and go. haha. Some eat like animals....true. :)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
    thank you
Comment from ScarletClearwater
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I deconstructed this piece and found that perhaps you are talking about fat America and then the fact that hunters hunt for sport and not need. The poem was alittle abstract, but I liked what I got out of it. Great job.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
    read the prologue of the book and it would make perfect sence
reply by ScarletClearwater on 25-Jan-2012
    Oh, Ok!