Comment from SS. Anjum

Excellent

Nice poem on faith.......Faith and belief makes us walk on the right path, prevents going astray......it is faith that draws us towards God, belief brings hope in life, hope gives strenth to live.....Enjoyed your work!

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 09-May-2020

Thanks for your kind words and review.. Much appreciated

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a lovely poem about embarrassing life. It envolves doing for others and avoiding temptation and lighting the paths for others to find their way from darkness to light. I seen your post lately. I use to read them years ago but I was off FanStory for a while. I just came back in January. You are still on my fanlist.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 09-May-2020

Hi Beth.. Yes you are still on my fan list too.. Both been here a while now.. Like you in out fanstory depending time funds and arrived back here last week... Thanks for your kind review and hope all is well with you yours... Take care... ♥️

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Such a delightful offering for the contest of Spiritual poetry in abcb rhyme scheme -- may you have good luck in the voting booth. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 09-May-2020

Hi.. I appreciate your kind wishes a input... It's a revival poem but I thank you for taking time to look.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This spiritual poem, Of What Is Life?, is a neat testimony and praise to the type of life one leads when the soul is owned by God and not the world.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 09-May-2020

Thank you for taking time to read... And too your kind comments.

Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

This is a very inspirational poem that was a great read. I liked the positivity of this poem. It made me feel good. This is a well penned poem. Good on you. -January L.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 09-May-2020

Thanks for an encouraging review and your kind imput. Is much appreciated.

Comment from DIS-illusioned

Excellent

--"Spiritual ?????????
Of What is Life?"
Yes, it is--spiritual. LOL.
--"To suffer for one's enemy
To turn the other cheek."
So, so difficult to do.
--Very good rhymes and rhythmic flow.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2012

thank you I really appreciate you taking time to review and comments too...LOL....sue

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your rhythm and rhymes in these quatrains. I especially enjoyed your "intoxication/cup" metaphor, so perfect for this inspirational piece. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012

thank so Joan much for your encouraging review and comments too...always appreciated sue

Comment from Honeysuckle1876

Excellent

Beautifully written. Great rhyme and rhythm. Wonderful message and spiritual poem. I didn't see any mistakes. Great job. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012

thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, much appreciated...sue...sorry little late

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

Of what is life? To show the world temptation is but the devils lot,divine intoxication,drink of life's cup... Well said this is a beautiful poem good luck. Deorre

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

thank you so much Deorre for your encouraging review and kind words..much appreciated..

Comment from KinaSalad

Excellent

Hi there, I enjoyed reading your little poem here, I like the lines, 'to light the path of darkness', and 'illuminate the way'. Thanks alot for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012

Thanks so much for your encouragement and review Tira..much appreciated...