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Unstoppable

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Meaning matters right?"
I am sick and tired of everyone bullying.

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Comment from JennyJuice
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This is well done with great flow and a great message of self-discovery and independence. I think you need to change your "now"s to "know"s though.

Excellent poem!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
    Kay thanks for the tip.
Comment from ScarletClearwater
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Change the last line's "now" to "know" and it will be perfect. This is just and updated comment to my previous remark and rating.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
    Is it better