Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Gremlinsmom
I wish I knew what the challenge was! Certain words or an idea? Whatever it was it made for a good poem. I liked this...and could see it. Which is always a good thing. I liked it a lot!
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I wish I knew what the challenge was! Certain words or an idea? Whatever it was it made for a good poem. I liked this...and could see it. Which is always a good thing. I liked it a lot!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2005
Comment from Jaxson Phoenix
Not sure what the challenge was, but the poem itself was excellent. What else would one expect from the # 3 poet on the site. #3 today, # 1 tomorrow. Well done.
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Not sure what the challenge was, but the poem itself was excellent. What else would one expect from the # 3 poet on the site. #3 today, # 1 tomorrow. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2005
Comment from Graceheart
Your giving soul and gentle heart are ever evident in each of your poems! You reach out and touch any and all hearts that need affection, each stray dog that need a pat on the head and a scrap or two from a table! Your love never ceases to try and give peace and kindness to all who are weary! You are stimulated by these things because you are all of these things! You are a living breathing beautiful person who finds the greatest treasures in life by sharing, giving of yourself. You do not expect the same in return, but whenever it happens you show the most wondeful form of gratification, Your Love! Thank you for these tender feelings and a superb poem!
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Your giving soul and gentle heart are ever evident in each of your poems! You reach out and touch any and all hearts that need affection, each stray dog that need a pat on the head and a scrap or two from a table! Your love never ceases to try and give peace and kindness to all who are weary! You are stimulated by these things because you are all of these things! You are a living breathing beautiful person who finds the greatest treasures in life by sharing, giving of yourself. You do not expect the same in return, but whenever it happens you show the most wondeful form of gratification, Your Love! Thank you for these tender feelings and a superb poem!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2005
Comment from Brimstone
Pretty picture, good title, message. Well put together free verse poem.
Flowed along nicely. All of these are stimuli to a passionate soul. ----I couldn't agree more.
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Pretty picture, good title, message. Well put together free verse poem.
Flowed along nicely. All of these are stimuli to a passionate soul. ----I couldn't agree more.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2005
Comment from Cosette
This release has a soft, pleasant feel. While mentioning some of life's greatest pleasures, it also has a spiritual quality to it that I find in lots of your work. Very nice read.
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This release has a soft, pleasant feel. While mentioning some of life's greatest pleasures, it also has a spiritual quality to it that I find in lots of your work. Very nice read.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2005
Comment from Robert E. Blackwell
I think you did great on this one because of the variety of examples and images you wove into this work. You did the picture you were challenged with proudly.
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I think you did great on this one because of the variety of examples and images you wove into this work. You did the picture you were challenged with proudly.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2005
Comment from Lestina
Jewell,
I'm really amazed at you, how you can just make poems so easily out
of life. It's a beautiful thing!
This of course is a beautiful poem. I really like the closing, it's you alright,
you give and you share your beautiful works! Thanks!
Lestina WELL WRITTEN!!!!
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Jewell,
I'm really amazed at you, how you can just make poems so easily out
of life. It's a beautiful thing!
This of course is a beautiful poem. I really like the closing, it's you alright,
you give and you share your beautiful works! Thanks!
Lestina WELL WRITTEN!!!!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2005
Comment from Delhini
a passionate soul... this I know you are. As such everything around you stimulates you... the muse is everywhere for you... in all that you do.
I wish this poetic soul every success.
D
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a passionate soul... this I know you are. As such everything around you stimulates you... the muse is everywhere for you... in all that you do.
I wish this poetic soul every success.
D
Comment Written 21-Jan-2005
Comment from made2soar
Very good writing about some good stimulation material. I also like the picture, it gives some visual stimulation to a very nice poem. Jim
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Very good writing about some good stimulation material. I also like the picture, it gives some visual stimulation to a very nice poem. Jim
Comment Written 20-Jan-2005
Comment from oldpro
aww that is so beautiful, the simple things in life are so rewarding,
nature is all,including we as people,and as loving souls to behold such and to know these as stimuli,,,very pretty jewell,,i love it!.....
I wonder what the challenge was to??,,,,,
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aww that is so beautiful, the simple things in life are so rewarding,
nature is all,including we as people,and as loving souls to behold such and to know these as stimuli,,,very pretty jewell,,i love it!.....
I wonder what the challenge was to??,,,,,
Comment Written 20-Jan-2005