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Comment from amada
This poem led to explore in all the great beauties that are still there; fresh and in nature. Lovely and at the same time haunting presentation.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2012
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This poem led to explore in all the great beauties that are still there; fresh and in nature. Lovely and at the same time haunting presentation.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2012
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Thank you
Comment from rchitwood
Your poem is very lovely with the images of beauty one takes for granted. In the forest and the wind that plays with nature. Very good structure a pleasure to feel the image so clear. Your photo goes well with your poem. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Your poem is very lovely with the images of beauty one takes for granted. In the forest and the wind that plays with nature. Very good structure a pleasure to feel the image so clear. Your photo goes well with your poem. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Thank you I was driving in the car watching the other cars fly by and wonder if they saw the simple beauty of the world.
Comment from wishtowrite
This is a poem that speaks volumes in few words. I like the theme and it flowed softly from thought to thought.The art work was well chosen for the poem.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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This is a poem that speaks volumes in few words. I like the theme and it flowed softly from thought to thought.The art work was well chosen for the poem.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Thank you
Comment from Ekim777
An intriguing poem. What is refined beauty. The knotted, gnarled, twisted boughs of a tree can symbolize beauty so can any lady who reveals something of her femininity. Still your images are fascinating because you create a scenario in which our imaginations can dance. -Ekim
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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An intriguing poem. What is refined beauty. The knotted, gnarled, twisted boughs of a tree can symbolize beauty so can any lady who reveals something of her femininity. Still your images are fascinating because you create a scenario in which our imaginations can dance. -Ekim
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Thank you
Comment from robyn corum
Your poem was eloquent, but I didn't completely understand it. What are:
lines that none
seem to see past
??
Possibly add something to the author's notes section?
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Your poem was eloquent, but I didn't completely understand it. What are:
lines that none
seem to see past
??
Possibly add something to the author's notes section?
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Everyone seems only to see material things and all the teenagers in this genartion don't seem to be looking past what they have in front of them.
Comment from adewpearl
it's still there - add apostrophe
I don't understand your author's notes?
Lovely illustration and presentation
for this free verse poem about the kind of beauty I've always loved the best, the simple and classic :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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it's still there - add apostrophe
I don't understand your author's notes?
Lovely illustration and presentation
for this free verse poem about the kind of beauty I've always loved the best, the simple and classic :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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I don't understand about the add apostrophe do you mean there'
SMSAE is my signature I'm Keimosibi daughter
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the add apostrophe refers to needing an apostrophe in it's since it is a contraction for it is :-)
Comment from tonytnt
There is a meaning here, though I don't quite catch it maybe its hidden from my realm of expertise. Really I'm just doing it for the points.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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There is a meaning here, though I don't quite catch it maybe its hidden from my realm of expertise. Really I'm just doing it for the points.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Made my day that was so honest I nearly fell of my chair with laugther.
Comment from TammyGail
Excellent work on this poem keimosobie
I really enjoyed the read much
It was well written and expressed in few words
Loved your imagery used for this
Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Excellent work on this poem keimosobie
I really enjoyed the read much
It was well written and expressed in few words
Loved your imagery used for this
Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Its not him its me his daughter I got borad and his account was open. Thanks for the reveiw I didn't think it was that good.
Comment from Modee
Beautiful words, beautiful colors chosen and a wonderful picture to go along with the post. This is very nice. Its...should be it's...other than that, very nice. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Beautiful words, beautiful colors chosen and a wonderful picture to go along with the post. This is very nice. Its...should be it's...other than that, very nice. :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Thank you and thanks for pointing the mistake
