Chosen Colors
Journal into poetry17 total reviews
Comment from Priyanka Deshpande
One of the best poems I have ever read in fanstory. Its beautiful. I especially loved the way it ended. Yes we all do know the colors of our soul.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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One of the best poems I have ever read in fanstory. Its beautiful. I especially loved the way it ended. Yes we all do know the colors of our soul.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Priyanka, for this encouraging review!
Comment from rspoet
This is a very fine poem, Chosen Colors
The rhyme are very good in abab pattern
The meter flows nicely and reads extremely well
The theme is carried out consistently through the poem
Emotions come in many colors,
sorrow for one may be joy to another
Blue may be sad or a beautiful sky,
cobalt or cerulean, baby or navy
Great picture to accompany the poem
framed in the color of the sunset
Very well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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This is a very fine poem, Chosen Colors
The rhyme are very good in abab pattern
The meter flows nicely and reads extremely well
The theme is carried out consistently through the poem
Emotions come in many colors,
sorrow for one may be joy to another
Blue may be sad or a beautiful sky,
cobalt or cerulean, baby or navy
Great picture to accompany the poem
framed in the color of the sunset
Very well done.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much rspoet, for your lovely insight and encouraging review!
Comment from Lesley Collier
A beautiful poem expressing the colors of our emotions and how they affect all of us in different ways. Wonderful flow and use of words.
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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A beautiful poem expressing the colors of our emotions and how they affect all of us in different ways. Wonderful flow and use of words.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Thank you so much for this kind, generous and encouraging review!
Comment from Jean Lutz
Thank you for sharing the colors of your soul. I do not find it silly at all. I do think it is important to keep searching the colors of creation and maybe find your place in the rainbow.
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Thank you for sharing the colors of your soul. I do not find it silly at all. I do think it is important to keep searching the colors of creation and maybe find your place in the rainbow.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Thank you Jean, for your kind and encouraging review!!
Comment from Ben Colder
I like Blue because of the deity. Purple because of it's Royalty. Your poem is right on. It moved well reaching for the sky. I thought of the Rainbow and the promise God made to us. Well done poet. This is good.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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I like Blue because of the deity. Purple because of it's Royalty. Your poem is right on. It moved well reaching for the sky. I thought of the Rainbow and the promise God made to us. Well done poet. This is good.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind encouragement!!
Comment from invisible.touch
I absolutely love the flow and rhythm of this. Also the changing colours like photographs black and white to sepia to technicolour and then the colours drain away again. Thank you for sharing. invisible.touch x
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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I absolutely love the flow and rhythm of this. Also the changing colours like photographs black and white to sepia to technicolour and then the colours drain away again. Thank you for sharing. invisible.touch x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much invisible touch, for your kind and encouraging review!!
Comment from terry drake
Wearing a multicolored coat to wrap your soul in as you relate your poem to the reader. Good cadence and good rhymes where both enhance your theme.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Wearing a multicolored coat to wrap your soul in as you relate your poem to the reader. Good cadence and good rhymes where both enhance your theme.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review!
Comment from visionary1234
I enjoyed this write, right up until the end ... when I wasn't quite sure of the "conclusion" - we have someone whose colors are dank and dark, but they're still able to respond to a beautiful sunset ... is it that they can still RECOGNIZE bright colors, even if they, themselves, dont' feel them??
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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I enjoyed this write, right up until the end ... when I wasn't quite sure of the "conclusion" - we have someone whose colors are dank and dark, but they're still able to respond to a beautiful sunset ... is it that they can still RECOGNIZE bright colors, even if they, themselves, dont' feel them??
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your insights and kind review!
Comment from 4tulips
Indeed you can write a very good poem. We all don't see through the same pair of glasses and see the same thing. We choose our words different and separate from others to describe the same thing. Blue does seem as a common word to describe sorrow and sadness. But you're right in what you say, it could be any color. Just as you know the colors of your soul. Nobody knows you better than yourself. Enjoyed your poem and picture. Thank you.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Indeed you can write a very good poem. We all don't see through the same pair of glasses and see the same thing. We choose our words different and separate from others to describe the same thing. Blue does seem as a common word to describe sorrow and sadness. But you're right in what you say, it could be any color. Just as you know the colors of your soul. Nobody knows you better than yourself. Enjoyed your poem and picture. Thank you.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely marvellous poem that you have composed here for us old sport. Well done with this splendid work that we have here.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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This is an absolutely marvellous poem that you have composed here for us old sport. Well done with this splendid work that we have here.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you!!
