Comment from afcata22

Excellent

Nice wish you got there. What I derived from this is that the author had a dream so beautiful that when she woke up, she wished upon the star that her dreams would become reality. OR it could be literally that the author is wishing upon a star for a night filled with wonderful dreams. Eitherways, it was nice. Goodluck with ur contest! :)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012

thanks for this comment and appreciation..I'm really grateful as this is my first piece of writing whih I posted here on fanstory:) so thanks once again:)

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

I like this entry
Now to the serious stuff the review
Please be aware that this is a rating, generated from the darn info, pumped into this computer and not yours.
Syllable count...................Spot-on
Flow of piece....................Superb
Artwork.............................Sadly none
Rhyming...........................N/A
Content ...........................Sanity prevailing
Presentation stanzas........Regular
Alliteration/ assonance....Found none
Final diagnosis..................Sane and serene
Total................................. 10/10
Result computed...............Give this five stars
Computed Comments.......This is an excellent poem
Reviewers comments:
Good work here my dear fellow poet, the result is rather splendid and extremely pleasing if I may say so, old sport.
Well done just add the artwork to make this competitive.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012