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Together, someday

Losing loved ones

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Comment from michaelrandolph
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very short and heart felt poem, The picture is so fitting. Your notes on the bottom had so much more of a dimension to it. Wonderful

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Thank you for your comment, very uplifting.
Comment from poetbear
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I know too well.
I can't go because it breaks my heart and for me they are with me always without going.
A piece of your heart breaks a little and the memries sustain you.
Brillaint imagery and metaphor. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    It is hard to go, but we both know there's no one there. Praise God. Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Doc Holiday
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This one is a real tearjerker!
Well-written!
My condolences on your losses with hopes of your enduring memories of your loved ones!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    I does hurt, but someday all the tears will be gone. Oh happy day! Thank you for your comments, much appreciated.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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Awe, that was so sweet, touching and well done. My best to you, I enjoyed your poem and the message. Thanks for using my work, I'm honored. Loyd

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
    Glad you contacted me as I want to ask if it's alright to use both works together, just the way it is, to post on facebook, etc. Thank you for allowing me to use your work.
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 06-Jan-2012
    Send me an email and I will send you a copy with my name in the lower corner and that will be fine.
    loydsnotes@hotmail.com
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 06-Jan-2012
    Also let me know which works they were. Loyd
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
    The work was the man kneeling at the grave.
reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 07-Jan-2012
    Good morning. I ent it to you. I thought you had another one as well. LOyd
Comment from l.raven
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How sad it is to lose our loved ones. But the one thing I believe is we will see them again. Very nicely written. And the perfect picture

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
    It is sad for us to lose but they are the winners and our prize is where they are, where we will be together, someday. Thank you so much for your comment.
Comment from trinalynnes
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Nicely written. Just a few words but well placed and go along with the artwork in such a manner that a few are all you need for the large amount of emotion that it stirs.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
    You're right about the large amount of emotion that it stirs. Thank you for your comment but the photographer deserves the bulk of any praise. When I saw the photo I knew it was the one. Thanks again.
Comment from reconciled
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Haunting little poem.Perfect execution of a 5-7-5.You take the reader to a sad place,but in the end a twinkle of hope.Great job!God bless.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
    Those ghosts can haunt, can't they...good memories. I already know you're a much better writer than I am, what took me a whole poem to say you said in one word: reconciled. Thank you very much for your review and I hope God richly blesses you and yours. Looking forward to when the twinkle of hope becomes the Blessed Hope, Praise God. Thanks again.