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Comment from Writingfundimension
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I love this contest. Your entry is really cute and says a lot with the use of texting language. Good concept for the contest and I wish you luck with it.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012
    thank you writing :)
reply by Writingfundimension on 02-Jan-2012
    You're welcome!
Comment from Scarlettdreams
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Very cute. Good luck in the contest. I thought this was a very fun idea and you have done the prompt justice here. Well done. Bravo

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012
    thank you scarlett :)
Comment from size17
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Great work - glad to see it in the classified formatting. Although you could have kept it going in the heaven one (ie..clr bl skies) The names are great. The free AC/heat are clever notes.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012
    good idea! fixed it! thank you size! :)
Comment from wordsfromsue
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Ooh, this is very good! Wickedly descriptive, clearly spelled out dwelling places. The basement apartment doesn't seem to have much to offer, unless you're crazy about heat! Take the penthouse. :-) Creative!

Brilliant write!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012
    LOL! thank you words :)